Sunday, July 15, 2012

First Cry

© Written by Tarang Sinha







World rejoiced at her
 Arrival, battle of life
Begins with first cry

Written for: Haiku Heights
                   Poets United




20 comments:

  1. You have so beautifully and successfully summed up the miracle called birth in just 12 words!! Great composition, Tarang :)

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  2. So True ... nice take on the prompt !!!

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  3. Superb Haiku.... I loved this one!

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  4. @ Swarnali: Thank you so much!:)

    @ Green Speck: Thank you!:)

    @ Me: Thanks a lot!:)

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  5. One of the most beautiful haiku poems. Well done! :-)

    And the baby in the picture is SO cute. ^_^

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  6. The Scream (painting reference) begins with the first cry! Beautiful haiku!

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  7. Dear friend,
    Great post...reminds us all about the beauty of life.

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  8. Wonderful haiku and so true ~~ thanks, ^_^ (A Creative Harbor)

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  9. @ Mirage: Thank you very much!:)

    @ Gemma Wiseman: :) Thank you!:)

    @ Andy David: Thank you!:)

    @ Carol: Thanks a lot!:)

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  10. Battle of life begins with first cry....Very beautiful lines Tarang :)

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  11. good haiku...I especially like:

    battle of life
    Begins with first cry

    ...nicely done!

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  12. Thank you poet laundry! Glad you liked it:)

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  13. Such a beautiful work,. lovely

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  14. super, absolutely, enjoyed the breath inbetween.

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  15. Hi! Added you as Liebster Blog Award recipient.

    The Link:http://jaskirancanvas.blogspot.in/2012/07/on-receiving-liebster-blog-award.html

    Keep Creating! :)

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  16. Your writing prompts list on the sidebar was very helpful...I explored to those new places...Thanks to you :)

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  17. @ Jaskiran: Thank you so much!:)

    @ Valli: Yes, they are helpful!:)

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