Reflection of my thoughts and imagination
We long for those words. Nice one.
Great interpretaion of the prompt. Trapped by our own uncertainty - perhaps no one can rescue us from what we have created on our own?
Those are the words we can all agree on! Nicely written.
Uncertainty can be like an uncontrolled whirl within a prison!
We have all been there.....awaiting those comforting words...
I like this. It tells a story. Maybe a new Dr Who episode outlined in haiku?
@ Judith Westerfield: Maybe you're right! Thank you!:)@ ND Mitchell: Thank you!:)@ Gemma Wiseman: Well said!:)@ Joanne: :)@ Alicekeysmd: I don't know about "Dr Who" but it can be a story of many confused souls. Glad you liked it. Thanks!:)
really enjoyed the time slipping piece: it doesn't matter how much one convinces oneself it isn't a big deal, there is always that nagging old "time slipping" eating away.
Sometimes only words are that we need to rescue a soul from a state of wretchedness. Lovely haiku!Lord’s Play
This is what we need at times !!!
Every confused soul seeks for such a help! Beautiful set Tarang! :)
@ Thecheesewolf: Thanks!:)@ Meenakshi: You're right! Glad you liked it. Thank you!:)@ Green Speck: True!:)@ Valli: You're right! Thank you!:)
I find both of these chilling really. I seem to get a different message from them than some of the other readers. I read the words of desperation rather than hope. Nice writing, and thanks for participating in Poets United!
this is a yearning that seems endless... no matter how much one is reassured, it returns again and again.
Wow! I feel the pain of this poem and the hope for rescue.
I can remember feelings like this, which you have captured well. One wants to assure the narrator: trust the unfolding - for all will be well.
the first haiku is powerful, requiring no more words to carry full impact. well done.
I agree we search for hope and help!I love how well you shared your message! :D
Sometimes external rescue does not exist and inner strength must arise.
@ Mary: Desperation is somehow common for a confused soul, trapped in an eddy of uncertainty, as it desperately yearns to come out of that phase...Thank you!:)@ Laura: Maybe you're right. One has to put effort to get out of this situation. But words of assurance bring some solace to some extent :)@ Judy Roney: Glad you felt what I tried to portray. Thanks!:)@ Sherry Blue Sky: Yes! Thank you!:)
@ Kim Nelson: Thank you!:)@ Ella: Thanks so much!:)@ Susan: sometimes...Maybe you're right! Thanks:)
It captures a lot of what I'm feeling of late. TY! :-)Eliz
mixed feelings....I can so realte to the emotions in these lines. We all go through such moments when we are totally caught up and confused...!
Uncertainty is the watch-word of the present.Nice.
@ Gayu: True! Thanks:)@ Rudraprayaga: :) Thank you!:)