Sunday, January 20, 2013

The veil of dusk

© Written by Tarang Sinha






The veil of dusk falls
Night sleeps in arms of twinkling
Stars, bright dawn awaits...



       Poets United




27 comments:

  1. Image and haiku compliment each other well and both are enjoyable individually.

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  2. bright dawn awaits.. to bring a new day, new opportunities, new experiences and new happiness :)

    beautifully written Tarang :)

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  3. I have somehow always loved the idea of dusk setting down as a veil.. :) as if covering a face, so when the veil is lifted (dawn arrives), a beautiful bright face appears! :)

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  4. I adore a well-constructed haiku. I adore this.

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  5. I adore a well-constructed haiku. I adore this.

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  6. Beautiful words and oh, what a MAGNIFICENT sky!!!!!!!!!!

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  7. "Night sleeping" That's a grrrrrrrrreat way of describing it.

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  8. the veil of dusk.. something i would love..

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  9. @ J Cosmo: Thanks!:)

    @ Dave King: Thanks so much!:)

    @ Rhythm: Well said! Thank you!:)

    @ Chhavi: Beautiful idea! Isn't it?

    @ Anthonynorth: Thanks a lot!:)

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  10. @ Kim: Thank you!:)

    @ Sherry Blue Sky: Thanks so much!!:)

    @ Judith: Thank you soooo much!!:)

    @ Lady in Red: Thanks!:)

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  11. Tarang, this haiku has a touch of truth and hope. Nicely written! Looking forward to more. :)

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  12. A bright dawn is always round the corner :-)

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  13. I just love the night sleeping in the arms of the twinkling stars!!

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  14. I love your haikus a lot Tarang, they are much more than just words!

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  15. Wonderful arrangement of words and scenes.. lovely..

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  16. Beautiful... and the picture is spectacular.
    :-)
    Eliz

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  17. beautiful imagery!

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  18. @ Green Speck: :)

    @ Wabisabipoet: Thank you!:)

    @ Me: Thank you so much! Glad you like it...:)

    @ Rudraprayaga: Thanks!:)

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  19. @ Ashivani: Thanks a lot!:)

    @ Eliz: Thanks so much!:)

    @ Sanjana: Thank you!:)

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  20. Hmmm....lovely! these lines bring in a feeling of Hope...to await for something best to happen!

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