Tuesday, November 16, 2010

Eyes

© Written by Tarang Sinha





                                            

                                                                          Eyes...
Twinkling and sparkling eyes.
The best part of one’s feature
The earnest viewer of all the creatures
They talk without any word
It can sense all the feelings,
 those are unheard.
But think of those lives
Who lives in the darkness
Unable to see this colorful world
And repent on their feebleness
You can light up the other lives
Getting beautiful vibes
Come on
Become an eye donor
And live a life after life.



Submitted to: Magpie Tales
                         : Monday Morning Writing Prompt

                 

14 comments:

  1. That was wonderful I love the eye donor part too. :)

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  2. Great campaign for eye donors:-)

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  3. Donating one's eyes is a most generous gift.

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  4. "...and live a life after life." A wonderful line.

    I think you should consider sending this to the organ donation center...They might be interested.

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  5. Excellent write!
    Lovely creative page, love it :)

    Palindrome poems

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  6. Interesting take on this prompt. And good advice, we all should donate.

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  7. I truly thank you all for such nice comments! I'm glad you all liked it:)

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  8. Wonderful poem and I know someone who did that when they died. It is a truly beautiful thing to do for another person. I am a donor of any or all parts after I die.

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  9. Great way to remind others that eye donors give the miracle of sight .

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  10. Very good. Excellent poetic reminder.

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  11. I love the concept of eyes communicating its so true. Lovely message =)

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  12. I thank you all for your appreciation. I'm glad you all liked it!:)

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  13. "repent on their feebleness"

    this is a good line...i liked it.

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