Wednesday, February 15, 2012

Smile never gives up

© Written by Tarang Sinha







    Smile never gives up
Even in the marsh of gloom
     Determined to bloom



Written for: The Haiku Challenge
Also Shared@ Haiku My Heart



28 comments:

  1. @ Janaki: Thanks!:)

    @ RS: Thank you:)

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  2. Haiku...That was rhyming too! Wow...Awesome dear :)

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  3. @ Valli: Ya, it's rhyming...Thank you so much for liking this!:)

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  4. Be determined.. Loved your take on the image Tarang...

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  5. Nice one...but haiku are not supposed to rhyme dear. Maybe you can change gloom to mud...just a suggestion ~

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  6. It is good to have an uplifting spin on the prompt! :-)

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  7. mast :)

    and why can a haiku not rhyme????

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  8. @ Blossom: Thanks!:)

    @ Someone is special: Thank you!:)

    @ Grace: I truly welcome your suggestion but I think the word gloom has its own significance in this haiku. I could have used Grief (If rhyming in haiku is strictly against the rule. I don’t know about that.) Thanks for your comment:)

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  9. @ Becca: Thanks!:)

    @ Live2cherish: Thanks!:) And about rhyming...I have no idea.

    @ Amber: Thank you!:)

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  10. So grateful for determined smiles !

    Happy Friday !

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  11. This is fabulous! A smile that never gives up. :)

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  12. Determined to bloom ~ lovely haiku ~namaste, carol (A Creative Harbor) ~ enjoy the weekend ^_^

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  13. Love it!
    I think it is a very clever pairing,
    The photo and the haiku.
    I wasn't aware rhyming wasn't allowed.
    ♥♥♥

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  14. Charming, Tarang. And, you go right ahead and break the "rules". It worked.

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  15. There's something so poignant about this and yet funny, too. Thanks.

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  16. This post makes me smile! Have a happy, happy, happy weekend!

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  17. @ Kim: Thank you!:)

    @ Helen: Glad you liked it. Thanks!:)

    @ Carol: Thank you! Namaste:)

    @ Laura: Thanks a lot!:)

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  18. @ priti: Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it:)
    I also don't know about any such rules.

    @ Annie: Thanks for liking it:) I was not aware of breaking any rules:)

    @ Foxysue: Thanks!:)

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  19. @ MMT: Yes, well said. Thanks!:)

    @ Fran: Thanks!:)

    @ Rebecca: Thank you:)

    @ Chèvrefeuille: Thanks a lot!:)

    @ Marit: Glad it made you smile:) Thanks!

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