Wednesday, March 16, 2011

I wonder!

© Written by Tarang Sinha



Image from Google


Sky suffused with roseate hues
Flock of birds creating nice views
Mellow breeze tickling curls
Bevies of chuckling girls
All these pleasing things
Enhance the charm of evening
But, I wonder!
The charisma of dusk,
Never fascinates me.

It reminds me of memories, 
Mirth and melody 
... that I miss                                  

It permeates my visage with gloom
Never allows my heart to bloom
It makes me feel a void within me,
Recall the dreams, now I could not see.
I wonder…
The charisma of dusk,
Never fascinates me.



Submitted to: 3WW  
                           (Breeze, Mellow and Tickle)
Shared@ Poets United




17 comments:

  1. Yes, very enticing..I love how you worked all three prompts into the same line as well..expertly done..Jae :)

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  2. Very well done, rich with colour... as is the glorious picture!

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  3. Thank you so much Deborah!:)

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  4. Sheilagh Lee said"It reminds me the memories that I missed."
    That says it all.Very well written You paint the picture so brilliantly.

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  5. Woww Sooo Beautiful Inspiring Relaxing write up :) :)

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  6. Thanks a lot Sheilagh & Creativity!:)

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  7. Strangely enough, the dusk does bring gloom to me. Well done.

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  8. Well done on your use of the three words, and great poem too! Thank you.

    The Poetry Bin

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  9. Thank you so much The Poetry Bin!

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  10. beautiful wonders.
    sorry for missing all 3ww entries.

    busy with poets rally preparations, commenting, and stuff...
    cheers.

    love your attitude.

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  11. Like the way you end ur stanzas...

    Thanks

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  12. So beautiful and rich with color and thoughts, that sprang to life!
    Well Done

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  13. @ Matthew John: Thank you!:)

    @ Ella: Thank you very much!:)

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