Thursday, August 25, 2011

The aura of dusk

© Written by Tarang Sinha
















The sky turned rosy
Waves of breeze is doing waltz
Dusk draped the aura

Flocks of vivid birds
Breath of freedom they inhale
Going back to their home










Submitted to: Haiku Heights
                           Haiku My Heart
Also shared@ Ruby Tuesday








23 comments:

  1. A lot said in few lines :)
    Nice job !!

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  2. "breath of freedom" I love that line.

    JJRod'z

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  3. The breeze doing the waltz, eh? Pretty image!'Going home ' is always a nostalgic theme.
    Rosie

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  4. I truly thank you all for such nice comments! I'm glad you all liked it.:)

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  5. Both are very beautiful haiku. The photo has me gazing. I wonder about the birds and how they must feel as they fly. You describe it in a wonderful way, going back to their home inhaling their freedom. Just beautiful

    Peace

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  6. Beautifully descriptive haikus! Well done. Wishing you a grand weekend! Cathy

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  7. I like the image and creative work on the prompt.

    Lovely haiku set ~

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  8. Oh my... your pic and haikus leave are breathtaking!

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  9. your haiku form a lovely story of beauty and home coming.
    thank you for both.

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  10. Oh yes, want to be there, waltzing along ~ beautiful.

    Sue x

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  11. I agree, very beautiful and poetic phrasing that creates a painting with words and your image is beautiful as well. Nicely done!
    Noelle

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  12. Thank you so much! Your valuable comments mean a lot. I’m glad you all liked it.:)

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  13. I like the waltz of the breeze :) Sounds wonderful, a beautiful haiku duo!

    Mine - Patiently Trying

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  14. Birds going home remind me that I am far away from mine...

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  15. So many birds on the wing in silhouette look wonderful against the rosy sky and contrasting landscape silhouettes!

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  16. Beautiful photo and you have a beautiful blog too..

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  17. beautiful sunset :-), was here or Ruby Tuesday 2, hope that you can return the visit too.

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