Thursday, June 27, 2013

A smooth journey

© Written by Tarang Sinha





Emotions melted
They break the periphery

For a smooth journey






45 comments:

  1. WOW! What a lovely Haiku. The B/W pic is apt.

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  2. Emotions melting and relating it to tears is such a beautiful expression. Lovely!

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  3. When emotions are hit hard, they indeed strew the path .

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  4. So true ~ lovely haiku ~ (this may be a duplicate post)

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  5. such a perfect haiku
    expressing a profound inner journey.
    why do we resist the healing that comes from honest expression?

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  6. Re-read your Haiku. The sketch of the eye and tear look real.

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    1. Thanks for re-reading it!!
      Yes, it's really nice sketch!! :)

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  7. Strong words and strong emotion - wonderful haiku!

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  8. Good haiku. Loved the image, it was glorified by your apt words. :)

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  9. Lovely expression on tears! Beautiful haiku Tarang! :)

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  10. That is what a haiku is about.. to be short yet powerful! Your's was perfect :)

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    1. Thank you so much!! Glad you liked it:)

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  11. I love the beginning image.. the fact that emotion can melt.. beautiful.

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  12. The times of pain...hard, but I think our tears smooth the rough patches. This was lovely!

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  13. so beautiful... sometimes it does indeed take the release of tears to break the surface tension and heal the depths of our hearts.

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  14. "for a smooth journey"......I enjoyed your haiku so much.

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    1. Thank you, Thank you, Thank you for such a lovely comment!:)

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  16. I guess it could be a strange thing that I chose this following Thursday's new theme as "journey" and not as of yet read your Haiku, I guess you could say it was a good choice to match them up.

    My headache is feeling a little better right now and so am being able to read through the postings. So am glad to see someone thinking along the same lines.

    I love the picture and am so jealous of those eyebrows, they do look real. Loved how the Haiku put feelings into the picture and then when you looked at it again you could feel the sadness in your heart.

    Thanks for sharing such a wonderful Haiku with us for this weeks Theme Thursday. Have a happy week.

    God bless.

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    1. Glad you liked it. Thank you for such a nice comment!:)

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  17. The overflow of emotions when heartfelt!! Well expressed!!
    Coming from Haiku My Heart~Firefly

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    1. Thanks for visiting & liking my work!:)

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