Saturday, March 24, 2012

Memories





Blows of fate detached
The blissful togetherness
Memories still haunts



Heart yearns to get back
Those golden moments, pain seems
Beyond endurance




Written for: Haiku Heights
Shared@ Poets United












14 comments:

  1. creative haiku ~thanks, namaste, ^_^ ~

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  2. Heart yearns to get back those golden moments...wishes.

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  3. Expresses aching sadness and loneliness so well...

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  4. @ Carol: Thanks! Namaste:)

    @ Janaki: :)

    @ Bruce: Thank you!:)

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  5. I can feel the pain. Well written.

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  6. pain beyond endurance sounds like time for morphine

    two senryu dedicated to the novelist

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  7. that was touching Tarang :)
    u r really good at expressing a lot in very few words

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  8. @ Karen: Thank you!:)

    @ Zongrik: :)

    @ Jyoti: Thank you so much!:)

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  9. I am glad I read this and learnt something from you...

    Thanks for such heart touching lines!

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  10. @ Me: Thank you so much!:)

    @ Rashmi: Thanks!:)

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  11. Feelings that are so true for many. Difficult to endure a broken romance. Nicely written.

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  12. A fairly common emotion beautifully penned.

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  13. @ Ellecee: Thank you!:)

    @ Enigmatic Soul: Thanks!:)

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