Saturday, December 3, 2016

Dangling desires...

© Written by Tarang Sinha







Dangling desires,
Seek assurance; here comes
The flushed streak of hope!

Crimson hue of bliss,
A piece of peace, faraway...
yearnings unfulfilled.


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19 comments:

  1. dear tarang,

    you are crushing my heart wide open with your gorgeous haiku!
    thank you for arriving with your heart full of pure gifts!

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  2. Such longing in these haiku... lovely imagery and the "piece of peace, faraway..." is a great play on words... always hoping... lovely Tarang!

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  3. Close but just out of reach - sometimes what we desire is exactly that.. wonderfully written

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  4. desire, hope and despair, like a full life cycle...

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  5. Can we ever reach the thing we need most? or is it just a crave that never will help us... love the poem

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  6. I like that "flushed streak of hope".

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  7. Beautiful phrasing especially love "Crimson hue of bliss,
    A piece of peace, faraway." ❤️

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  8. I like the imagery depicting our desires - always a few steps away from us. Lovely writing!

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  9. But give me "the flushed streak of hope" still!

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  10. your streak of hope is like a light in the forest or a last star fading, however seen a light non the less

    much love...

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  11. Monday WRites #86 is live, you are invited to link in

    much love...

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  12. @ Rebecca: Thank you for this lovely comment! Glad you liked it. :)

    @ Lea: Thank you so much! :)

    @ Jae: Close but just out of reach...yes. Thanks! :)

    @ Sumana: True.

    @ Brudberg: Thought-provoking. Glad you like the poem. Thanks. :)

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  13. @ Purba: Thanks. :)

    @ Sherry: Glad you liked it. Thank you! :)

    @ Rosemary: Thank you. :)

    @ Garon: Thank you! :)

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  14. @ Sanaa: Glad you liked them. Thank you! :)

    @ Myrna: Glad you liked. Thanks a lot. :)

    @ Susan: You will find that for sure! :)

    @: Gillena: Thanks for this nice comment. Linked my poem there. :)

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  15. Thank you Tarang for linking your charming haiku to Monday WRites #86

    much love...

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  16. Inspiring ! addiction to readers!

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