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Saturday, December 3, 2016

Dangling desires...




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Dangling desires,
Seek assurance; here comes
The flushed streak of hope!

Crimson hue of bliss,
A piece of peace, faraway...
yearnings unfulfilled.


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19 comments:

  1. rebeccaDecember 3, 2016 at 7:41 PM

    dear tarang,

    you are crushing my heart wide open with your gorgeous haiku!
    thank you for arriving with your heart full of pure gifts!

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  2. LeaDecember 4, 2016 at 10:19 AM

    Such longing in these haiku... lovely imagery and the "piece of peace, faraway..." is a great play on words... always hoping... lovely Tarang!

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  3. Jae RoseDecember 4, 2016 at 6:21 PM

    Close but just out of reach - sometimes what we desire is exactly that.. wonderfully written

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  4. Sumana RoyDecember 4, 2016 at 6:48 PM

    desire, hope and despair, like a full life cycle...

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  5. brudbergDecember 4, 2016 at 10:17 PM

    Can we ever reach the thing we need most? or is it just a crave that never will help us... love the poem

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  6. Purba chakrabortyDecember 4, 2016 at 11:11 PM

    Beautifully written :)

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  7. Sherry Blue SkyDecember 5, 2016 at 12:05 AM

    I like that "flushed streak of hope".

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  8. Rosemary Nissen-WadeDecember 5, 2016 at 3:02 AM

    Nice metaphors.

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  9. ZQDecember 5, 2016 at 3:54 AM

    Those were awesome. Thanks.
    ZQ

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  10. Sanaa RizviDecember 5, 2016 at 8:18 PM

    Beautiful phrasing especially love "Crimson hue of bliss,
    A piece of peace, faraway." ❤️

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  11. Myrna R.December 5, 2016 at 10:16 PM

    I like the imagery depicting our desires - always a few steps away from us. Lovely writing!

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  12. SusanDecember 6, 2016 at 12:50 AM

    But give me "the flushed streak of hope" still!

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  13. Gillena CoxDecember 6, 2016 at 1:50 AM

    your streak of hope is like a light in the forest or a last star fading, however seen a light non the less

    much love...

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  14. Gillena CoxDecember 6, 2016 at 1:50 AM

    Monday WRites #86 is live, you are invited to link in

    much love...

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  15. Tarang SinhaDecember 6, 2016 at 2:53 PM

    @ Rebecca: Thank you for this lovely comment! Glad you liked it. :)

    @ Lea: Thank you so much! :)

    @ Jae: Close but just out of reach...yes. Thanks! :)

    @ Sumana: True.

    @ Brudberg: Thought-provoking. Glad you like the poem. Thanks. :)

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  16. Tarang SinhaDecember 6, 2016 at 2:58 PM

    @ Purba: Thanks. :)

    @ Sherry: Glad you liked it. Thank you! :)

    @ Rosemary: Thank you. :)

    @ Garon: Thank you! :)

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  17. Tarang SinhaDecember 6, 2016 at 3:14 PM

    @ Sanaa: Glad you liked them. Thank you! :)

    @ Myrna: Glad you liked. Thanks a lot. :)

    @ Susan: You will find that for sure! :)

    @: Gillena: Thanks for this nice comment. Linked my poem there. :)

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  18. Gillena CoxDecember 6, 2016 at 4:17 PM

    Thank you Tarang for linking your charming haiku to Monday WRites #86

    much love...

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  19. Kishan LalDecember 22, 2016 at 11:13 PM

    Inspiring ! addiction to readers!

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