Thursday, December 16, 2010

You…

© Written by Tarang Sinha

          
                 That was a prized moment…
                 when I welcomed you in my life.
                 You made me understand…
                 the essence of happiness.
                 Your touch is like velvet.
                 Your eyes so mesmerizing.
                 Your voice is so melodic.

                 Your breath is like whisper of love.
                 Your smile is divine.
                 Your hug is like heaven.
                 You’re my best companion.
                 You made me feel complete.
                 You’re precious to me… my son.



                 Image Prompt@: Magpie Tales 
                 

                 Also submitted to: Promising Poets Parking Lot

37 comments:

  1. a mother's love is evidently demonstrated here.
    well done magpie.

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  2. Any mother can relate...nice take.

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  3. This is beautiful ... Happy Holidays!

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  4. A perfect description of how my own mother has made me feel throughout my life. Excellent write!

    Rick

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  5. Tarang this is beautiful...a mother's love is always full of strength and beauty! :-)

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  6. If my boy weren't in school I'd rush to give him a hug after reading this. How true these words ring. Beautiful tribute.

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  7. This was an image I couldn't get my thoughts on that time for Magpie :) I loved the take on this, and you write it with such emotion! Admire it, Tarang!

    My Post Is Here

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  8. Absolutely wonderful. Those of us blessed with sons will all relate with heart and mind.

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  9. stunning expressions.
    well done,

    welcome to poets rally.

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  10. I truly thank you all for stopping by and posting such nice & valuable comments:)

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  11. @Vinay: (Generally & initially) I can’t get my thoughts on any given prompt :) Thanks a lot. I'm glad you liked it.

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  12. Lovely !Warm and heartfelt-just like a mother's love!

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  13. this is just beautiful Tarang...

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  14. Thank you so much bendedspoon, Butterflies of time & Sam.:)

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  15. So very sweet. I know how you feel--I feel the same about my two daughters--being their mother.

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  16. This is quite the same feeling I have about my daughter. She is my twin soul. Touching write.

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  17. o yes they sure transform all that we are :)
    enjoy the rally!
    http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/2011/04/22/on-peace-and-wisdom-haiku-poem-ing-on/

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  18. thats a really beautiful rendition :)

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  19. nice one.. my thursday post : http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/06/20/me-before-us/

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  20. I know exactly how you feel. Well expressed.
    Matthew

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  21. I truly thank you all for your nice comments!:) I'm glad you all liked it.

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  22. Refreshing to read about a mother's love. It feels much the same with daughters and doesn't change when they are grown.

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  23. Perfect for Mother's Day, your emotion really comes through.

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  24. Thank you so much Victoria, Jack & Li!

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  25. Simple, beautiful, genuine !
    I am Purvi ~
    http://puplumages.wordpress.com/2011/04/22/music-to-the-soul/

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  26. Thank you so much Purvi for stopping by and posting such a nice comment.

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  27. Lovely. Velvet touch is bliss.

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  28. It's funny how such small people can have such a big impact. I don't have any children of my own, but I love working with my Girl Scouts!

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  29. Hi, Anarchist Girl Scout. Thanks for stopping by. Being with children is such an enjoyment.

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