Sunday, November 20, 2011

Final adieu

© Written by Tarang Sinha



Emotions blended
With smiles and togetherness
Reside in the urn

Seek permission for
The final adieu with tears
Hurtful truth of life


Memories never…
…Say goodbye, treasured throughout
The journey of life









For: Haiku Heights
        One Single Impression
         Poets United




20 comments:

  1. This is very poigant and rouching Tarang.. recently saw a Urn carrying ashes of a dear one..your poem brought it all back..

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  2. Well knitted to involve multiple prompts!

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  3. there is a softness is your words, lulling and heartbreaking. I love that. I am following!!! :)

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  4. The first two lines were just great!!

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  5. I think the 1st stanza is a wonderful poem on its own.

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  6. Three perfectly woven haikus. Nicely written.

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  7. so true, memories always and is forever a part that lives with us

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  8. A nice suite of haiku. I love the third verse the most. Espescially the last line "the journey of life" wonderfull crafted.

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  9. @ RS: Thanks that you liked my poem, but what you recalled is really painful:(

    @ Old Raven: Thanks.

    @ Becca: Thanks!

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  10. @ Morning: Thank you. Glad you liked it.

    @ magicinthebackyard: Thank you so much! Welcome to my blog:)

    @ Laura: Thanks!:)

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  11. @ M.A.S: Thank you:)

    @ Harshadji: Thanks! Glad you liked it:)

    @ The Write Girl: Thank you so much!:)

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  12. @ Deli: Yes you're right. Thanks:)

    @ Chèvrefeuille: Thank you so much! Glad you liked it:)

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  13. beautiful n soulful

    Loved it tarang :)

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  14. Loved the last one - beautifully portrayed - those beautiful memories never die.

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  15. Very nice... I like that emotions reside in the urn, and saying goodbye to the journey of life ~

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  16. wonderful.......especially the first

    i loved it

    here is mine
    http://thealchemycritics.blogspot.com/2011/11/urn.html

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