Tuesday, August 30, 2011

Move on!

© Written by Tarang Sinha








Move on!

Opportunities are waiting for you.
So what, if this chance
Slipped from your hand
New horizons are standing
With open arms.


Move on!

Happiness is waiting for you
So what if grief
Knocked your heart
New joy is ready
To embrace you

Move on!

Amity is waiting for you
So what, if you
Couldn’t bond with someone
New camaraderie is
Extending hands for you

Move on!

Creativity is waiting for you
So what, if you
Lost your muse for once
New vision is
Taking shape for you.

Move on!

Life is waiting for you
So what if, darkness
Is suffused all over
New dawn is
About to rise very soon.


 Submitted to: Magpie Tales
                            Short Story Slam
                           Poetry Picnic 
                           One Single Impression

25 comments:

  1. Refreshing to read a positive, uplifting take on the photo!

    Rick

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  2. love the uplifting attitude.
    well done.

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  3. love the uplifting attitude.
    well done.

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  4. Move on is a magic word..
    u have depicted it beautifully

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  5. @ Rick & Morning: Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it:)

    @ Jyoti: Yes it is. Thanks a lot:)

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  6. you know....the whole poem is amazing..
    but the ending takes away the cake.
    big time.big ,big time.!

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  7. THIS IS FILLED WITH POSITIVENESS....:
    REALLY NICE

    FROM,
    LIFE
    MY ENTRY FOR THE SHORT STORY SLAM BOOK IS
    http://blindfold-princess.blogspot.com/2011/08/awaiting.html?spref=bl

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  8. @ Saurabh: Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it.

    @ Life: Thank you!:)

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  9. A wonderful poem, and I totally agree with the message!

    Here is my week 9 offering: http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/08/31/dearest-john-2/

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  10. Beautiful choice of words and wonderful perspective regarding the photo! Thank you :)

    http://kaysalady.wordpress.com/2011/08/31/at-half-past-four/

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  11. you have written it wholeheartedly,

    thanks for sharing.

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  12. Very inspiring! Keep it up. Move on..

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  13. Such an love poem and the words are so positive and really inspire.

    http://gatelesspassage.com/2011/09/05/the-milky-seas/

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  14. such inspiring affirmations! thank you for sharing! :-)

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  15. This is great advice and worth remembering. :-)

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  16. Very very energetic and inspiring words.

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  17. You write so good.. but I would rate it among your best.. loved it..Tarang..

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  18. I truly thank you all for such nice and encouraging comments:)

    @ Rameshji: Thank you so much for such a nice comment! I'm glad you liked it:)

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  19. So full of truth. I like how you put the prompt word in every verse. That second to last verse especially resonated with me. Great piece!

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  20. positive attitude....very nice!

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  21. @ Laura: Thank you so much! I'm happy that you liked it:)

    @ Sandra: Thank you!:)

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  22. wonderful rhythm infused with hope in this poem :)

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