Thursday, September 1, 2011

Ink of joy







Failure drags the zest
Mumbles the lost hope and strength
Peace of life shattered

But,

Penetrate the fog
Of dismay, and fill the life
With flying colors

So,

Shrug off the sadness
Write the chapters of your life
With the ink of joy



        3WW







23 comments:

  1. Inspiring words and I loved how u seamlessly strung the words of two different prompts together.

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  2. This is beautiful.. an inspiring ending for the combination! Loved it!

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  3. The last three lines are a great haiku on their own. I like these especially.

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  4. Can't argue with that ink of joy! It is quite a drug.

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  5. My heartfelt thanks to all of you!:)

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  6. I enjoyed the last three lines as a stand alone haiku.
    Great read.

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  7. that last Haiku is my new mantra, splendid writing!

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  8. Phew, I love the line 'ink of joy'!!!

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  9. Wonderful way to combine prompts! I love the whole thing, especially the progression to the "ink of joy" at the end. :)

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  10. Love "ink of joy!!"

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  11. You write fabulous poetry/stories,

    Please check out short story slam week 9 today.

    Hope to see you around.

    Best!
    xoxox

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  12. Beautiful Tarang, please keep writing such delight..

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  13. I LOVE the idea of colours flying...just brilliant!!

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  14. Very nice. Sound advice. Writing can and does set us free. Love it!

    Peace

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  15. The third haiku is my favorite.

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  16. Such beautiful life lessons in your words...great job!

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  17. Well you certainly find a lot of ink of joy here and amongst your fellow writers.

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