Wednesday, May 29, 2013

let’s say Good bye , for a change

© Written by Tarang Sinha





Heated arguments
Blaming each other, let’s say
Good bye, for a change


Fresh air of freedom
Following your own dreams and
Desires, for a change



      Poetry Jam
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            Theme Thursday
             Haiku My Heart

49 comments:

  1. Ha! This gets right to the heart of the matter. Well said!

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  2. I love the way you put across things so beautifully Tarang in simple yet elegant words!

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    1. Thank you so much Me for such lovely words for me!!:)

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  3. I like the repetition you used. Sometimes good byes can bring a good change!

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    1. Thank you Robyn! Glad you liked it:)

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  4. GOODBYES can bring a kind of FREEDOM, can't they? Always good to see you in Poetry Jam!

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    1. Sometimes, they can. Thank you so much!:)

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  5. A welcome change in such a situation, lovely write.

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  6. Sounds like a good change! Neatly done.

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  7. Yes!!! Love where you went with the prompt.

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    1. I'm glad you liked this. Thank you very much Helen!:)

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  8. Freedom is the spirit to move on! well said...

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  9. Sometimes we really want space and change. well said.

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  10. Sometimes good-bye is the only word

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  11. Sometimes its better to bid goodbye amicably before things turn ugly and greater hurt follows...Following your dreams is the best way to regain your love of life.

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  12. Painfully beautiful "Let's say goodby for a change". I like this line very much.

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  13. Succinct and to the point ... yes, for a change just get the parting over ... well done!

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  14. Sometimes a change is exactly what is needed!

    Old Cat

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  15. change can take true courage. so glad to have you and your haiku back at haiku my heart!

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  16. Saying goodbye is often the first step to self discovery.

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  17. Brilliant. Goodbye's are often the beginnings of hellos.
    Dropping by from Verse First - Freedom prompt.

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  18. Sometimes you need to make that Good bye permanent because the arguments never stop. They might have different causes or lessen for a while but real change to end the arguments rarely happens. I guess the real change happens when both people move on to find someone who they rarely argues with them. But once in a while saying good bye makes each other realize what is important.

    Thanks for sharing such a great Haiku for this weeks Theme Thursday. Hope you have a peaceful week with wonderful dreams.

    God bless.

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  19. well said! :) sometimes change is necessary :)

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  20. Goodbye for Good:) Lovely !

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