Sunday, June 3, 2012

Optimism

© Written by Tarang Sinha



Lock the negative
thoughts, let the soothing breeze of
Optimism flow

Fickle principles
Blur the clarity of thoughts
Prefer steadiness

Not only in our
Dreams, but success should bloom in
the garden of life



Written for: Haiku Heights
                      Carry on Tuesday
                       One Single Impression
                     Poets United
Shared @ The Mag
                             Haiku My Heart
                              Hyde Park Poetry

45 comments:

  1. Lovely poem as always...full of optimism :)

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  2. nicely set haiku in form of poem ...

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  3. I like that first one best.. it's inspiring, simple and well writ.. It stands on its own too, which doubles that beauty. Thanks for sharing.

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  4. Wonderful set of haiku ~ lovely messages ~ thanks, ^_^

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  5. not really an optimist or pessimist but a human I am :) delightful haiku :)

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  6. Yes, success should bloom in the garden of life. Excellent set of Haiku.

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  7. @ Anu: Thank you!:)

    @ Leo: Thanks a lot for your nice words! Glad you liked it:)

    @ Carol: Thank you very much!:)

    @ Maharukh: :) Thanks!:)

    @ Harshadji: Thank you so much!:)

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  8. You mix all the prompts and write as a single haiku post...Good creativity....Good one on optimism Tarang! :)

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  9. May it always bloom in the garden ~

    Happy day to you ~

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  10. Our themes and messages run on parallel tracks today!
    http://www.kimnelsonwrites.com/2012/06/02/do-what-you-love/

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  11. @ Valli: Thank you so much Valli!:)

    @ Grace: Thank you!:)

    @ Kim: :)

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  12. As always Tarang, wise words with poetic beauty,.garden of life :)

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  13. so much beauty in your haiku!
    perfect uplifting messages taking us inward to paradise. thank you tarang for being here sharing yours.

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  14. in the garden of life...so true!!

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  15. Yes! life is a garden- nice uplifting poem.

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  16. All very positive and lovely haiku :)

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  17. Lovely poem. My COT is up too.

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  18. Hi Tarang ~~ Fickle principles versus steadiness. Which will win?
    ..

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  19. A positive take on the prompt. Love the message.

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  20. @ Jaideep: Thank you very much!:)

    @ Rebecca: Thank you so much!:)

    @ Neha: Thanks!:)

    @ Sandra: :)

    @ Becca: Thanks!:)

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  21. @ Kathe: Thank you!:)

    @ Loredana: Thanks a lot!:)

    @ KB: Thanks!:)

    @ Jim: Principles & Steadiness:)

    @ awalkinmyheart: Thank you so much!:)

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  22. Life IS a garden, isn't it?

    =)

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  23. Each one is a pearl of wisdom! Well written. :)

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  24. Wonderful set of haikus. I'm reading this on an overcast Monday when I'd like to hole up with a book, but you've reminded me to be optimistic.

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  25. I love your poem on optimism. So very inspiring.

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  26. Fickle principle! Love this! Great read!

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  27. enjoyed reading all three..positive messages there:)

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  28. @ Amber: Thanks a lot!:)

    @ Redondowriter: :)Thanks!

    @ The Write Girl: Thank you!:)

    @ Karen: Thank you so much!:)

    @ Sanjana: Thank you!:)

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  29. Gorgeous! So glad I stopped by to read this..very uplifting :-)

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  30. Thanks for stopping by! Glad you liked it. Thank you so much Lenore!:)

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  31. Beautiful positive words.

    Anna :o]

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  32. Tarang,

    A lovely Haiku of positivity.

    Eileen

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  33. success does bloom in the garden of life ;) -robin
    http://mysecretinnuendo.com/2012/05/29/covered-in-moss/

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  34. I need to take your advice and lock the negative thoughts! Thank you!

    The Lock Begins to Sing

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  35. I relate a lot to ur haiku always... the frequency matches a lot with my thoughts... a lot of positivity in ur work! :) Loved the last haiku vmuch..

    Flavors of experience!

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  36. @ Eileen: Thank you very much!:)

    @ Robin: :)

    @ MMT: Glad you think so. Thank you so much!:)

    @ Pranita: :-) Thank you!:)

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  37. Your positive message comes across very nicely in the triple haiku form you have chosen.

    Happy Rally! You can find my entry at:
    http://elainedanforth.wordpress.com/2012/09/08/fall-into-anticipation/

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