Tuesday, May 21, 2013

Thorns of betrayal

© Written by Tarang Sinha






Thorns of betrayal
Spiked the indelible trust
Pure love is tainted


For: Haiku Heights
              Theme Thursday


34 comments:

  1. Great lines Tarang. Thoughts of a broken heart. So moving.

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  2. Betrayal is definitely the thorn behind the rose of love!

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  3. Very beautifully expressed the pain of betrayal that pricks like thorn.

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  4. Ouchh.... that was so real!

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  5. Wow! This is beautifully tragic

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  6. Betrayal is certainly a thorny issue.

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  7. Betrayal is painful and scars love... beautifully crafted Haiku tarang.

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  8. The betrayal is permsanent while the trust is indelible ~ clever haiku on a tragic theme x

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  9. pure love is tainted... how harsh they sound and yet reveal the truth of today.

    wonderful words :)

    Richa

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  10. "thorns", "spiked" -- love the wording!!!!

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  11. excellent..have never thought of betrayal as the thorn of a rose but it fits.

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  12. the pain of betrayal - felt here...

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  13. Love for Rose and betrayal for thorns -Nicely done!

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  14. Betrayal wounds love! Powerful haiku Tarang!

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  15. Betrayal and loss of trust can surely taint pure love. The sad thing is that it will never be the same after that because once trust is lost it can never be truly regained.

    This is a beautiful Haiku that says so much.

    Happy Theme Thursday and thank you for this Haiku. Have a wonderful week.

    God bless.

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    1. Very well said Mrsupole! Thank you so much!:)

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