Saturday, June 22, 2013

What's on the menu?




What’s on menu? we
Ask often, ignorant of
Starving innocents





30 comments:

  1. Yeah...we pretend to be oblivious to so many things. Nice.

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  2. I have difficult time with breaks in haiku lines since haiku first and third line should be able to be reversed. Just an offering:

    what's on the menu?
    asked often by ignorant
    starving innocents

    Hope you will forgive my observation. I do like the message you are conveying very much.

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    1. Err...Observation doesn't need forgiveness , I think. I just thought that starving innocents seldom get option to ask "What's on the menu?"
      I'm glad you liked the message here...Thanks!:)

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  3. Ahh..the picture speaks a volume..we should remember it when we waste food. People are still there without food like food for days. :(

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    1. :True!(Think about those starving people in Uttarakhand!

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  4. Wow. Hard hitting and painfully honest. Thanks for writing haiku for social activism. This is a writer's responsibility.

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  5. It's good to keep things in perspective, isn't it?

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  6. nothing like a jolt for reality for lunch.

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  7. ohh..
    you nailed it right on the heart.. !!

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  8. Ahh, this crushed my heart. A heartbreaking piece, Tarang. So beautifully penned...:)

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  9. ow, this is powerfully poignant

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  10. That's one powerful Haiku tarang, sadly we are quite blind and deaf
    to the world around us...

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  11. That is so true, we waste food which is so bad on our part. I cook twice a day in minimum quantity just to minimize the wastage.

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  12. Sad :( I feel why God is so cruel on them?

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