Reflection of my thoughts and imagination
Strong haiku!
Thank you!:)
Touching and the pic says it all.
Yes, the picture says it all...
Yeah...we pretend to be oblivious to so many things. Nice.
yes. Thanks!
I have difficult time with breaks in haiku lines since haiku first and third line should be able to be reversed. Just an offering:what's on the menu?asked often by ignorantstarving innocentsHope you will forgive my observation. I do like the message you are conveying very much.
Err...Observation doesn't need forgiveness , I think. I just thought that starving innocents seldom get option to ask "What's on the menu?" I'm glad you liked the message here...Thanks!:)
Ahh..the picture speaks a volume..we should remember it when we waste food. People are still there without food like food for days. :(
:True!(Think about those starving people in Uttarakhand!
Wow. Hard hitting and painfully honest. Thanks for writing haiku for social activism. This is a writer's responsibility.
You're right! Thank you!:)
It's good to keep things in perspective, isn't it?
Yes, it is!
nothing like a jolt for reality for lunch.
Thoughtfully put.
ohh.. you nailed it right on the heart.. !!
Thank you so much Jyoti!:)
the sad truth... :-\
Ahh, this crushed my heart. A heartbreaking piece, Tarang. So beautifully penned...:)
Thank you so much!:)
ow, this is powerfully poignant
Thanks a lot!:)
That's one powerful Haiku tarang, sadly we are quite blind and deaf to the world around us...
Thanks Reshma!:)
That is so true, we waste food which is so bad on our part. I cook twice a day in minimum quantity just to minimize the wastage.
yes, we should try & not waste the food.
Sad :( I feel why God is so cruel on them?
Yes, it is sad:(
Strong haiku!
ReplyDeleteThank you!:)
DeleteTouching and the pic says it all.
ReplyDeleteYes, the picture says it all...
DeleteYeah...we pretend to be oblivious to so many things. Nice.
ReplyDeleteyes. Thanks!
DeleteI have difficult time with breaks in haiku lines since haiku first and third line should be able to be reversed. Just an offering:
ReplyDeletewhat's on the menu?
asked often by ignorant
starving innocents
Hope you will forgive my observation. I do like the message you are conveying very much.
Err...Observation doesn't need forgiveness , I think. I just thought that starving innocents seldom get option to ask "What's on the menu?"
DeleteI'm glad you liked the message here...Thanks!:)
Ahh..the picture speaks a volume..we should remember it when we waste food. People are still there without food like food for days. :(
ReplyDelete:True!(Think about those starving people in Uttarakhand!
DeleteWow. Hard hitting and painfully honest. Thanks for writing haiku for social activism. This is a writer's responsibility.
ReplyDeleteYou're right! Thank you!:)
DeleteIt's good to keep things in perspective, isn't it?
ReplyDeleteYes, it is!
Deletenothing like a jolt for reality for lunch.
ReplyDeleteThoughtfully put.
ReplyDeleteThank you!:)
Deleteohh..
ReplyDeleteyou nailed it right on the heart.. !!
Thank you so much Jyoti!:)
Deletethe sad truth... :-\
ReplyDeleteAhh, this crushed my heart. A heartbreaking piece, Tarang. So beautifully penned...:)
ReplyDeleteThank you so much!:)
Deleteow, this is powerfully poignant
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot!:)
DeleteThat's one powerful Haiku tarang, sadly we are quite blind and deaf
ReplyDeleteto the world around us...
Thanks Reshma!:)
DeleteThat is so true, we waste food which is so bad on our part. I cook twice a day in minimum quantity just to minimize the wastage.
ReplyDeleteyes, we should try & not waste the food.
DeleteSad :( I feel why God is so cruel on them?
ReplyDeleteYes, it is sad:(
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