Wednesday, January 26, 2011

Conscience

© Written by Tarang Sinha



Tranquility scooches and, conniption
…finds a way in the mind.
Distinction between right and wrong…
…Becomes intricate to find.
 The conscience turns janky
And it may obliterate…
…the Amity, Ability and opportunity.

Try controlling your anger.
Kill the hatred...
... and develop harmony.
Spread peace and love everywhere,
The whole world will be…
…basking in the glory.


Prompt @: 3WW


16 comments:

  1. What an agile piece - you really used your words carefully and beautifully - 'amity, ability and opportunity'..was my favourite line..Jae

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  2. Wow you said so much with so little and using the prompts incredible.Truly lovely.

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  3. Indeed.. we must all live like that.. loved it..

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  4. Great use of the words and I love the message. Well done.

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  5. i enjoyed the way you used the words with intangible objects. the poem has a very nice feel to it. Lovely!

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  6. I especially loved the ellipses trailing off and on in some of the lines. An interesting stylistic choice that really makes this poem slip past smoothly.

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  7. You met the challenge and surpassed it. Nicely done.

    My 3WW: The Victual Voyager

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  8. Thanks. I'm glad you all liked it:)

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  9. Oh boy, do I hate it when my conscience turns janky! Great use of the prompts.

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  10. great job with a tough challenge.

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  11. Thanks ThomG. Yeah, it was a bit tough indeed.

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