Sunday, June 12, 2011

Triumph!

© Written by Tarang Sinha


Despite all the fight
Sometimes, Slavery of fate
Is unavoidable

Opportunity
Is slipping through my fingers
The future seems bleak

But…

My next step will be
One more endeavor for sure
Triumph can’t escape.


Submitted to: Haiku Heights
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21 comments:

  1. 'slavery of fate' is such a powerful line..it always worth trying to step on..Jae Rose

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  2. Powerful message and I love the sense of triumph at the end!

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  3. Thank you so much Jae & Mindlovemisery! I'm glad you liked it.

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  4. Lovely how you tie together fate, opportunity and triumph :)

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  5. I liked this very much, especially triumph not escaping - you have lightened my day :)

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  6. Thank you so much Leonard & Madhumati!

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  7. Thanks a lot Alice! I'm glad my poem could do so.

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  8. smart Haikus.
    good luck.
    live for the day.

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  9. Thank you so much Whitesnake, Jingle & Beccagivens!

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  10. Well said - you must keep trying, or all is lost.

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  11. 'slavery of fate'...powerful lines...there is always the conflict in the rational oriental mind...between free will/choice and destiny/fate...which is nothing but a kind of slavery! well done!

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  12. Try, try and try always. Never give up. that should be the mantra right?

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  13. Great job mixing all three prompt up to end up with a positive light

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  14. @pr910: Thanka a lot.

    @Ariel: Exactly. Thanks.

    @Kodjo Deyno: Thank you so much.

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  15. True words spoken from a wise mind. You have used these prompts like a true wordsmith.

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  16. Yes, opportunity, or "perceived" opportunity does seem to elude us all sometimes, especially as we age. Nice one.

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