Reflection of my thoughts and imagination
'slavery of fate' is such a powerful line..it always worth trying to step on..Jae Rose
Powerful message and I love the sense of triumph at the end!
Thank you so much Jae & Mindlovemisery! I'm glad you liked it.
Lovely how you tie together fate, opportunity and triumph :)
Aw...so true tarang sinha :)
I liked this very much, especially triumph not escaping - you have lightened my day :)
Thank you so much Leonard & Madhumati!
Thanks a lot Alice! I'm glad my poem could do so.
I like positive people!
smart Haikus.good luck.live for the day.
Thank you so much Whitesnake, Jingle & Beccagivens!
Well said - you must keep trying, or all is lost.
'slavery of fate'...powerful lines...there is always the conflict in the rational oriental mind...between free will/choice and destiny/fate...which is nothing but a kind of slavery! well done!
Try, try and try always. Never give up. that should be the mantra right?
Great job mixing all three prompt up to end up with a positive light
@pr910: Thanka a lot.@Ariel: Exactly. Thanks.@Kodjo Deyno: Thank you so much.
True words spoken from a wise mind. You have used these prompts like a true wordsmith.
Thank you so much Andy!
Yes, opportunity, or "perceived" opportunity does seem to elude us all sometimes, especially as we age. Nice one.
A great trio. Very profound.