Sunday, July 17, 2011

String of emotion.

© Written by Tarang Sinha




Though we’re strangers
Walking through the same pathway
Still, I strongly feel,

That…

We’re captivated
By an inexplicable
String of emotion.



Submitted to: Haiku Heights
 Sahred@ Poets United
                      Poetry Jam
                          


16 comments:

  1. Nicely done ... strangers and mystery indeed!

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  2. And it keeps on happening.. may the string prove to be strong.. God bless.. keep smiling and be happier always.

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  3. Yes, even strangers share some part of their life in common I guess :)

    Thank you for the support to Haiku Heights through the first year :) Looking forward to enjoying more of your haikus next year too!

    My Haiku ~ Break Free

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  4. Two strong haikus. I like the final lines. Nicely written.

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  5. Thanks a lot California girl and Becca:)

    @ Ramesh Sood: Yeah, it happens. Thanks a lot.

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  6. @ Leo: I also enjoy writing haikus 'now' & I’ll keep writing for sure. Thanks!


    @ The Write Girl: Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it.

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  7. I know this feeling, powerful and beautiful haiku

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  8. You tied your thoughts nicely together~
    I really enjoyed this! Beautiful~

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  9. Loved this! Very nicely balanced between the two halves of the poem.

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  10. I believe this as well Tarang....lovely writing! :-)

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  11. Hi, you submitted three for Poetry Jam, each one an older work. As we have a week, truly we/ I am only commenting on work that was written for this particular prompt in the spirit of Poetry Jam. Hope you will find your way back with a new work..

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