Wednesday, August 17, 2011

Beauty of nature unveiled!

© Written by Tarang Sinha






The field is dancing
With the melody of mellow breeze
The Beauty of nature unveiled.

Their hard work flourished finally
In the form of golden crop
She chuckles with delight

‘You can beat the poverty’
 Her heart assured her blissfully
 It will bring prosperity.

Mother will beam with contentment
Father won’t have to stoop
Burden of debt will be released.


Submitted to: Short Story Slam

14 comments:

  1. Makes me think of harvest time.
    Beautifully done I love it!
    Blessings

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  2. very beautifully u have unveiled the beauty of nature:)
    Nice read !!!

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  3. Thank you so much Bethe, Deborah & Jyoti! I'm glad you liked it.

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  4. I agree, this is wonderfully beautiful!

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  5. lovely lines...beautifully crafted words!

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  6. Thank you so much John & Kalyan. I'm glad you liked it.

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  7. The field is dancing
    With the melody of mellow breeze
    The Beauty of nature unveiled.


    lovely opening, well done.

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  8. A wonderful perspective on the prompt. Beautifully written poem.

    Here is my week 8 story: http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/08/18/amber-waves-of-grain/

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  9. Even though the character speaks of poverty , I like the positive and hopeful attitude at the end of the poem !

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  10. Hope is on the way, thanks for sharing...

    amazing emotions shared.

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  11. nice one. I love the hopeful tone of the poem.

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  12. Boy, does that last line hit the spot! Very well said.

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