Wednesday, September 14, 2011

Elixir of life

© Written by Tarang Sinha









A stain free heart is
Elixir of happiness
Don’t let envy pass

A ray of hope
Is the elixir of life
Ban pessimism


Trust and hard work is
The elixir of success
Don’t ever give up



          Short Story Slam




16 comments:

  1. well written ... words of wisdom ... liked it... :)

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  2. such positive elixirs we should all drink... :)

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  3. Lovely sprinkles of wisdom these.. liked and feel enhanced.. thank you Tarang...

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  4. Loved all three but the best are haiku one and three.


    Melanie

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  5. Couldn't agree more - pessimism can be so damaging.

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  6. I will do my best to learn this by heart!!

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  7. Nice!
    my poem!!
    http://dreamsflow.wordpress.com/poetry/dream-that-had-to-end/

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  8. Excellent counsel in these verses, Tarang. I like the repetition of the prompt in each one.

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  9. Very inspiring post! Nicely done :-)

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