Monday, September 5, 2011

Jealousy

© Written by Tarang Sinha









Friendship flourishes
With affection, care and trust
No place for jealousy

Weeds of jealousy
Embitter tender feeling
Friend becomes stranger









20 comments:

  1. Powerful thoughts on the insidious evil of jealousy!

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  2. How easily this can happen. It pays to be honest and upfront with friends. Nice work!

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  3. So true...nice haiku set contrasting friend and stranger..

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  4. I like the way you associate jealousy with weeds!

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  5. This is good...especially the second one. How unfortunate isn't it?

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  6. True words...like your words on how to keep a friend and how to lose one

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  7. Two great haiku.
    Just shows what a malignant weed jealousy can be.

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  8. Very interesting points. Thanks!

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  9. So very true what you say here and you have very well combined the two prompts!! They blend so easily!!

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  10. @ Gemma: Thanks!

    @ Geraldine: Thanks a lot.:)

    @ Grace: Thank you so much!:)

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  11. So true.. those unnecessary weeds. Friendship could definitely do without it! :)

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  12. @ Andy: Thanks!:)

    @ Knot2share: Yes it is. Thank you:)

    @ Saras: Thanks!:)

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  13. @ Mama Zen: Thank you so much!:)

    @ Susie: Thanks!:)

    @ mjshorts: Thanka a lot:)

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  14. @ Anonymous: Thanks.

    @ Thank you so much. Glad you liked it!:)

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  15. May all our friendships flourish, just as you describe!

    Things That Flourish Here and Here and Here

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  16. Sigh....A crude reality...You put it in simple yet very effective words....May such weeds never develop in any relation...

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  17. Beautifully written sad truth.

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