Monday, October 3, 2011

Fright

© Written by Tarang Sinha






                         
Fear of failure
Rises in the heart
Ignites the negativity
Growing qualms flicker
Hope gradually rekindles
Tension relieves slowly.






20 comments:

  1. Fabulous combination! Though the image is simple/hidden well in the arms, the eyes speak of this Fright that your words create.

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  2. Great job of describing fright..it builds and then is released. I have nominated you for the Versatile Blogger's Award:http://confessionsofalaundrygoddess.blogspot.com/2011/10/versatile-blogger-award.html

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  3. @ Reflections: Thank you!:)

    @ Susie: Thank you so much Susie for liking this piece & for the nomination!:)

    @ Jyoti: Thanks!:)

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  4. That is fabulous! I love the take you took with fright! Great job!
    Blessings

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  5. Very nice, Tarang! ~~ You have the answer to fright but it's still scary until things get better.

    This could be a fill-in-the-blank poem, replacing 'failure' with whatever is doing the frightening.
    ..
    I did mine on the Halloween vein, dated it Oct 31 but posted it today.
    ..

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  6. Very interestingly created...well done..

    Hope you will visit me here Tarang..

    http://rameshsood.blogspot.in/2013/05/and-stories-all-spillhaiku.html

    RS

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  7. I enjoyed your art work and poem. Nice acrostic!

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  8. Nicely done! Emotionally going from fear to hopeful and being okay. Something most I imagine relate to. I certainly do.

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  9. An acrostic poem... My latest obsession... Loved reading it!

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    1. Yes, it's interesting and challenging! Glad you liked it. I would like to read yours. Thank you!:)

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  10. beautifully written. Acrostics are challenging, allowing the flow to be and not feel forced... you've accomplished this so well.

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    1. Thank you so much for your appreciation!:)

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