Monday, December 26, 2011

You're like...

© Written by Tarang Sinha


It felt luminous
As you came in my life
You’re like moonlight
In the darkness

It felt warm
As you came in my life
You’re like sunshine
In a cold misty morning

It felt refreshing
As you came in my life
You’re like drizzles of rain
In a scorching heat of summer

It felt blissful
As you came in my life
You’re like bouquet of delight
In a lonely life

It felt exciting
As you came in my life
You’re like a desirable gift
In a festive season

It felt melodious
As you came in my life
You’re like mellow song
In a dull gloomy day




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13 comments:

  1. Only someone who has found true love can express such beautiful sentiments and see beauty everywhere.

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  2. emotional and moving,

    powerful thoughts.

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  3. Thank you so much OldEgg & Morning:)

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  4. Love the repetition here, it felt like excitement! That joy of the beginning of love and romance Perfectly weaved. Nice work.

    http://magicinthebackyard.wordpress.com/2011/12/26/singing-myself-to-wake/

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  5. very passionate poem! well done!

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  6. Lovely and lilting. I like the way you use repetition.

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  7. @ Summer: Thanks! Happy Holidays to you too:)

    @ MagicIntheBackyard: Thank you so much! Glad you liked it:)

    @ Marbles: Thank you:)

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  8. @ Yun Yi: Thanks a lot! I'm glad you liked it:)

    @ Agapintheclouds: Thanks:)

    @ Rosemary: Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked that:)

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  9. Magnificent!!! I wish I'd written this :).
    Thanks for stopping by my blog and leaving a comment!

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  10. it's great to have love come into your life

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