Saturday, January 14, 2012

Blissful Motherhood

© Written by Tarang Sinha


Blissful Motherhood
Felt proud of her real gem
Cuddled in fond arms


18 comments:

  1. This is such a cute haiku.. wow!!!

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  2. This is such a cute haiku.. wow!!!

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  3. Nicely done. Every child is a gem. Thank you for sharing.

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  4. you found your adorable gem

    <a href="http://zongrik.wordpress.com/2012/01/14/three-senryu-about-gems/>three senryu about gemstones </a>

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  5. What a wonderful take on the prompt! That is a beautiful picture to go with the haiku.

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  6. @ Rameshji: Thank you so much! Glad you liked it:)

    @ Chèvrefeuille: Thanks!:)

    @ Grace: Thanks a lot:)

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  7. @ Live2cherish & Zongrik: Thanks!:)

    @ Teresa: Thank you so much! I'm Glad you liked it:)

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  8. I love this haiku, it is beautiful!

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  9. Nice haiku Tarang :D!!!
    Picture is apt!

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  10. :) Nice haiku with an apt picture. But i think the second line has just 6 syllables. Please check that :)

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  11. Oh! just beautiful.

    Liked your nice presentation.

    Thanks.

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    please visit mine also.

    Best wishes.

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  12. @ Haikunights: Thanks a lot:)

    @ Divenita: Er...I found real an appropriate word and some dictionary suggests two syllables for it:) I think ‘Smiling gem’ is also nice but I prefer not to change. Thank you so much for your comment. I'm glad you liked it:)

    @ Becca: Thanks!:)

    @ Rakesh Kumar: Thank you so much!:)

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