Thursday, March 22, 2012

In the light of hope…





Image@ Poets United


Nurture your amateur dreams
In life, you must have themes
Chisel diligently your skill
Strengthen your will
Look straight at the aim
A destination with your name
Don’t let determination rest
Sometimes patience may seem a test
In the light of hope…
Failure will say its adieu
Trust your ability
Triumph can never betray you



                   Poets United
                   Hyde Park Poetry







11 comments:

  1. It was your last line that struck home with me.

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  2. I loved your last line ...truly in agreement!

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  3. powerfully positive. chisel and strengthen really set the tone.

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  4. Thanks a lot for your poem. I'll be keeping it in mind, it's really fantastic.

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  5. Wonderful I love the lyrical tone!
    It was so reflective and beautiful~

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  6. @ OldEgg: :) Thanks!

    @ Me: Thank you!:)

    @ Ed Pilolla: Thank you! Glad you liked that:)

    @ Tallyme: Thank you so much!:)

    @ Ella: Thanks a lot!:)

    @ Janaki: Thank you!:)

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  7. Inspiring. The poem sounded like the words coming from the lips of those amazing teachers we all once had.

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  8. Inspiring. The poem sounded like the words coming from the lips of those amazing teachers we all once had.

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  9. @ Marita Abraham: Oh, I'm glad you felt so! Thank you so much:)

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  10. so true Trust your ability
    Triumph can never betray you

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