Thursday, July 5, 2012

Balm of forgiveness

© Written by Tarang Sinha





Balm of forgiveness
Heals an aching heart that feels
Genuinely sorry



Written for: Poetry Jam



20 comments:

  1. It's always good to forgive !!!

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  2. @ Green Speck: :)

    @ Mary: Thank you!:)

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  3. Very nice! It plays here...the heart is already sorry, so forgiveness can find it's way...and make giver and reciever, better.

    Very nice.

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  4. You've said it all, so succinctly. Well done.

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  5. You used the word 'balm' perfectly.

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  6. Beautifully expressed - forgiveness is truly divine

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  7. the genuine part is def the key....for it does heal the heart...

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  8. One of the best Haiku I have ever read. Brilliant!

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  9. Yes, forgiveness is healing ... I like the balm metaphor

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  10. So much said in so few words. Excellent! I love these short form pieces that say a lot.

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  11. @ Unknowngnome: Thank you!:)

    @ Kolembo: Well said. Thanks!:)

    @ Valli: Thanks!:)

    @ Sherry: Thank you!:)

    @ Helen: Thank you!:)

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  12. @ Me: Yes it is. Thank you!:)

    @ Laurie Kolp: Thanks!:)

    @ Brian Miller: :)

    @ Saru: Thank you so much! Glad you think so:)

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  13. @ Loredana: Thank you!:)

    @ Mary: Thanks!:)

    @ Turtlemamoir: Thanks!:)

    @ Peggy: Yes, it's interesting. Glad you liked it. Thank you!:)

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  14. genuinely sorry is the key ingredient here.

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