Saturday, July 13, 2013

Showers of monsoon...

© Written by Tarang Sinha




Showers of monsoon
Veiled the tears of agony
Shattered dreams prickle


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18 comments:

  1. lovely, loved the essence :)

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  2. Wow... what a beautiful Haiku!!

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  3. Lovely haiku. And the picture is so beautiful. :)

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  4. the image you paint is so beautiful.. the beginning "Showers of monsoon" pulls one in.. it's somewhat refreshing.

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  5. Perfect pairing of words and image. Nice haiku!

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  6. Shattered Dreams Prickle - Love this line ! Fabulous Haiku !

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    1. Glad you liked it. Thank you Ruchira!:)

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  7. WOW! I can't explain why or how, but this hit me hard, made me feel desire on some level. The photo loaded a moment after I read the verse. Love it!


    Peace

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    1. I'm really happy you felt so...Thank you!:)

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  8. Very poignant Haiku. Loved it.

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