My Translation

Thursday, February 9, 2017

Warm Memories


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With every wave comes
A gush of warm memories 
Carved like names on rocks.

Fragrant emotions 
Wash over me, I smile
Like a crimson dusk

Screaming solitude 
Lingering sadness, I weap
Like a dewy dawn


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23 comments:

  1. Lisa at GreenbowFebruary 10, 2017 at 6:59 PM

    Beautiful!

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  2. Shanaya TalesFebruary 10, 2017 at 8:27 PM

    Okay, this Haiku, I like. 'Cause you see this makes sense. Again, leaving aside the mechanics, this was beautifully written, and image was well chosen too.

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  3. Magical Mystical TeacherFebruary 10, 2017 at 8:46 PM

    The sustenance of memories!

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  4. LeaFebruary 10, 2017 at 10:48 PM

    the waves carving names on rocks... that is so beautiful Tarang... my heart is full this morning with your beautiful and poignant words...

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  5. carol l mckennaFebruary 11, 2017 at 12:14 AM

    How creatively, lovely and poignant ~ thanks,

    Wishing you a Happy and Peaceful Weekend ~ ^_^

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  6. MarkFebruary 11, 2017 at 12:25 AM

    Weeping is OK too...

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  7. J CFebruary 11, 2017 at 1:06 AM

    Sounds so sad.

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  8. rebeccaFebruary 11, 2017 at 7:17 AM

    gorgeous-you have transported me with your haiku-thank you tarang sinha.

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  9. brudbergFebruary 12, 2017 at 9:35 PM

    Memories are such a large part of our beings.

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  10. madhumakhiFebruary 12, 2017 at 9:42 PM

    Oh wow! I loved the contrasting imagery between the transience of waves and the warm memories being carved. And the suggestive hint that our emotions are also like waves- they rise, they threaten to overpower us, and they wane, while leaving a lingering tinge of sorrow behind.

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  11. AnonymousFebruary 12, 2017 at 9:44 PM

    Fragrant emotions
    Wash over me, I smile
    Like a crimson dusk
    ...nice image..

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  12. Tarang SinhaFebruary 12, 2017 at 9:56 PM

    @ Lisa: Thanks! :)

    @ Shantala: Hey! Thank you so much for this 'feel good' comment. It makes me believe that I'm doing it right. :)

    @ Magical Mystical Teacher: :)

    @ Lea: I'm so glad you liked it. Thanks for reading. :)

    @ Carol: Thanks for this lovely comment. :)

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  13. Tarang SinhaFebruary 12, 2017 at 10:01 PM

    @ Mark: Oh, yes! It's absolutely okay. :)

    @ JC: You got it right. I was sad while writing this.

    @ Rebecca: I'm glad. Thanks for visiting and commenting. :)

    @ Brudberg: You're right.

    @ Madhumakhi: Oh, thank you for such a beautiful comment! How well you've understood this! Thanks for reading. :)

    @ Thotpurge: Thank you! :)

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  14. C.C.February 12, 2017 at 11:13 PM

    Warm memories can bring us so many emotions.....happiness at those good times, but then also, as you've suggested, a sadness at the loneliness we feel over perhaps no longer having that person in our lives. Great imagery here.

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  15. indybevFebruary 12, 2017 at 11:14 PM

    Lovely meaningful phrases! Beautifully written.

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  16. MaryFebruary 13, 2017 at 1:58 AM

    Love the waves of warm memories. So evocative!

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  17. ✿February 13, 2017 at 4:25 AM

    I like this very much.

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  18. Sumana RoyFebruary 13, 2017 at 10:35 AM

    warm memories, fragrant emotions and lingering sadness are the stuff life's made of...beautifully put Tarang...

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  19. Rosemary Nissen-WadeFebruary 13, 2017 at 5:23 PM

    Nice similes.

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  20. Sanaa RizviFebruary 13, 2017 at 7:17 PM

    Fragrant emotions
    Wash over me, I smile
    Like a crimson dusk

    Sigh.. beautiful!!❤️

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  21. Annie JeffriesFebruary 14, 2017 at 12:31 AM

    Gush
    Wash
    Weap
    Flowing waters

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  22. rudraprayagaFebruary 15, 2017 at 3:12 PM

    Beautifully versed.

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  23. ObsessivemomFebruary 18, 2017 at 9:37 PM

    Loved the imagery your words conjured up but I wish I understood Haiku better.

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