Saturday, February 19, 2011

Hope




          Night is an obscure darkness
          Which shudders yet,
          Gives a hope of roseate hues of dawn.

          Parting is such sweet sorrow
          Which agonizes yet,
          Gives a hope of reunion.

          Defeat is such awful experience
          Which disheartens yet,
          Gives a hope of victory.


         Prompt@: Carry on tuesday
         Also submitted to Sensational Haiku




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7 Comments:

Rinkly Rimes said...

Om other words, 'It's always darkest before the dawn'! I enjoyed this.

Tarang said...

Thank you so much :)

Ria said...

This does give hope

Anonymous said...

this is quite lovely but I fear not a Haiku. A Haiku is not just 3 lines but 5 syllables 7 syllables and 5 syllables again it is a structured poem. This is very pretty albeit no Haiku sorry

Tarang said...

Actually I'm a bit novice in this genre. But I won't stop trying. By the way, Thanks.

gsb3 said...

I like your poem. The compare and contrast pattern is interesting. I like showing the down-side and the up-side. It helps people like me remember both.

Tarang said...

Thanks gsb3, welcome to my blog. I'm glad you liked it.

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