My Translation

Saturday, February 19, 2011

Hope




          Night is an obscure darkness
          Which shudders yet,
          Gives a hope of roseate hues of dawn.

          Parting is such sweet sorrow
          Which agonizes yet,
          Gives a hope of reunion.

          Defeat is such awful experience
          Which disheartens yet,
          Gives a hope of victory.


         Prompt@: Carry on tuesday
         Also submitted to Sensational Haiku



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7 comments:

  1. Rinkly RimesFebruary 20, 2011 at 3:46 AM

    Om other words, 'It's always darkest before the dawn'! I enjoyed this.

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  2. Tarang SinhaFebruary 20, 2011 at 7:55 AM

    Thank you so much :)

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  3. RiaMarch 10, 2011 at 2:05 AM

    This does give hope

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  4. AnonymousMarch 10, 2011 at 4:40 AM

    this is quite lovely but I fear not a Haiku. A Haiku is not just 3 lines but 5 syllables 7 syllables and 5 syllables again it is a structured poem. This is very pretty albeit no Haiku sorry

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  5. Tarang SinhaMarch 11, 2011 at 10:20 PM

    Actually I'm a bit novice in this genre. But I won't stop trying. By the way, Thanks.

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  6. gsb3June 8, 2011 at 5:27 AM

    I like your poem. The compare and contrast pattern is interesting. I like showing the down-side and the up-side. It helps people like me remember both.

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  7. Tarang SinhaJune 8, 2011 at 1:11 PM

    Thanks gsb3, welcome to my blog. I'm glad you liked it.

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