"stress traps us easily" - I like the play of words with "easy". And the final notion to "fight for peace" is a thought-provoking oxymoron. In general, your haiku is three lines and I have been reacting to it in more :-) - that's amusing. Best of luck, M.
"stress traps us easily" - I like the play of words with "easy". And the final notion to "fight for peace" is a thought-provoking oxymoron. In general, your haiku is three lines and I have been reacting to it in more :-) - that's amusing.
ReplyDeleteBest of luck, M.
That's a fight worth having.
ReplyDeleteA great haiku.
ReplyDeleteStress indeed is never far away and life is not easy, but it's life's challenges that make it so much fun.
The haiku must not rhyme ideally and I think you came close with easy and easily.
ReplyDeleteNevertheless, I like the message of peace of mind ~
I will. I will fight for peace of mind! Well done!
ReplyDelete@ Mariya: Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it:)
ReplyDelete@ Imnotaverse: Of course it is:)
@ Mjshorts: Thanks!:)
@ Grace: Thanks a lot:)
ReplyDelete@ ShonEjai: Best of luck:) Thanks!
Very wise! Peace in simplicity!
ReplyDeleteI liked it but may have teased a bit more with "Fight for ease of mind.".
ReplyDeleteStress does trap us easily. Thanks and keep on fighting for peace of mind.
ReplyDeleteWise words!
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