It felt luminous
As you came in my life
You’re like moonlight
In the darkness
It felt warm
As you came in my life
You’re like sunshine
In a cold misty morning
It felt refreshing
As you came in my life
You’re like drizzles of rain
In a scorching heat of summer
It felt blissful
As you came in my life
You’re like bouquet of delight
In a lonely life
It felt exciting
As you came in my life
You’re like a desirable gift
In a festive season
It felt melodious
As you came in my life
You’re like mellow song
In a dull gloomy day
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As you came in my life
You’re like moonlight
In the darkness
It felt warm
As you came in my life
You’re like sunshine
In a cold misty morning
It felt refreshing
As you came in my life
You’re like drizzles of rain
In a scorching heat of summer
It felt blissful
As you came in my life
You’re like bouquet of delight
In a lonely life
It felt exciting
As you came in my life
You’re like a desirable gift
In a festive season
It felt melodious
As you came in my life
You’re like mellow song
In a dull gloomy day
Shared @ Poets United
Poetry Picnic
Sunday Scribblings
Only someone who has found true love can express such beautiful sentiments and see beauty everywhere.
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Thank you so much OldEgg & Morning:)
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ReplyDeleteHappy Holidays.
Love the repetition here, it felt like excitement! That joy of the beginning of love and romance Perfectly weaved. Nice work.
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Beautiful! Love is a wonderful thing!
ReplyDeletevery passionate poem! well done!
ReplyDeleteNice poem, Tarang
ReplyDeleteLovely and lilting. I like the way you use repetition.
ReplyDelete@ Summer: Thanks! Happy Holidays to you too:)
ReplyDelete@ MagicIntheBackyard: Thank you so much! Glad you liked it:)
@ Marbles: Thank you:)
@ Yun Yi: Thanks a lot! I'm glad you liked it:)
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@ Rosemary: Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked that:)
Magnificent!!! I wish I'd written this :).
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it's great to have love come into your life
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