In extreme adversity
When everyone disconnects
Tears refuse to stay in your eyes
Smile hesitate to appear on your lips
You find a connection with
An eternal friend
Always stays with you
It’s your shadow
That gives you a hope
That you’re not alone!
Under the heat of sun
Tree stands straight
Hoping to get a tender touch
Breeze kisses it softly
A connection develops
Tree dances in delight
Breeze blushes!
Eyes held with each other
A captivating glance
Establishes a connection
Expresses feelings without a word
Allowing emotion to churn inside
Love burgeons!
Tears refuse to stay in your eyes
Smile hesitate to appear on your lips
You find a connection with
An eternal friend
Always stays with you
It’s your shadow
That gives you a hope
That you’re not alone!
Under the heat of sun
Tree stands straight
Hoping to get a tender touch
Breeze kisses it softly
A connection develops
Tree dances in delight
Breeze blushes!
Eyes held with each other
A captivating glance
Establishes a connection
Expresses feelings without a word
Allowing emotion to churn inside
Love burgeons!
Written for Poetry Jam (Connection)
Also shared@ Hyde Park Poetry
Nice writing here. Establishing a connection with a friend is definitely a wonderful thing. Thanks for taking part in Poetry Jam. Here's mine:
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Wonderful Tarang...nice we connected.
ReplyDeletetarang this is beautiful. you are writing so eloquently about one of my polestars in life, connection.
ReplyDeletethank you for this!
@ Mary: Thank you!:)
ReplyDelete@ Janaki: Yes...really nice! Thanks:)
@ Rebecca: Thank you so much!:)
Superbly written....:)
ReplyDeleteVery nice poem - sweet and beautiful. I enjoyed it very much. Here is mine (since I can't comment by my name and URL: http://phoenix-em.com/mariyakoleva/2012/03/connecting/
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This is lovely. Thanks too for visiting my blog and continuing to participate at Poetry Jam.
ReplyDeleteWonderful...
ReplyDelete@ Me: Thank you so much!:)
ReplyDelete@ Mary: I'm happy that you enjoyed it:) Thank you!
@ Peggy: Thank you!:)
@ Sreeja: Thanks!:)
Very nice connections...friends, loved ones and nature ~
ReplyDeleteCheers ~
Thank you Grace!:)
ReplyDeleteVery fresh and original. I found it very thought-provoking.
ReplyDelete@ Dave King: Thank you so much! I'm so glad you think so:)
ReplyDeleteYou find a connection with
ReplyDeleteAn eternal friend
Always stays with you
Sometimes going within is the only way out, great poem!
Thank you Hannah!:)
ReplyDeleteThats a sweet poem.
ReplyDeleteWell said about making connections. so true!
@ Hema Rao: Thank you so much!:)
ReplyDeleteWonderful!
ReplyDelete@ rkgaron: Thanks!:)
ReplyDeleteTrees dance and breezes blush. Nice.
ReplyDeleteThanks Margaret!:)
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