Saturday, December 3, 2016

Dangling desires...







Dangling desires,
Seek assurance; here comes
The flushed streak of hope!

Crimson hue of bliss,
A piece of peace, faraway...
yearnings unfulfilled.


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19 Comments:

rebecca said...

dear tarang,

you are crushing my heart wide open with your gorgeous haiku!
thank you for arriving with your heart full of pure gifts!

Lea said...

Such longing in these haiku... lovely imagery and the "piece of peace, faraway..." is a great play on words... always hoping... lovely Tarang!

Jae Rose said...

Close but just out of reach - sometimes what we desire is exactly that.. wonderfully written

Sumana Roy said...

desire, hope and despair, like a full life cycle...

brudberg said...

Can we ever reach the thing we need most? or is it just a crave that never will help us... love the poem

purba chakraborty said...

Beautifully written :)

Sherry Blue Sky said...

I like that "flushed streak of hope".

Rosemary Nissen-Wade said...

Nice metaphors.

R.K. Garon said...

Those were awesome. Thanks.
ZQ

Sanaa Rizvi said...

Beautiful phrasing especially love "Crimson hue of bliss,
A piece of peace, faraway." ❤️

Myrna R. said...

I like the imagery depicting our desires - always a few steps away from us. Lovely writing!

Susan said...

But give me "the flushed streak of hope" still!

Gillena Cox said...

your streak of hope is like a light in the forest or a last star fading, however seen a light non the less

much love...

Gillena Cox said...

Monday WRites #86 is live, you are invited to link in

much love...

Tarang Sinha said...

@ Rebecca: Thank you for this lovely comment! Glad you liked it. :)

@ Lea: Thank you so much! :)

@ Jae: Close but just out of reach...yes. Thanks! :)

@ Sumana: True.

@ Brudberg: Thought-provoking. Glad you like the poem. Thanks. :)

Tarang Sinha said...

@ Purba: Thanks. :)

@ Sherry: Glad you liked it. Thank you! :)

@ Rosemary: Thank you. :)

@ Garon: Thank you! :)

Tarang Sinha said...

@ Sanaa: Glad you liked them. Thank you! :)

@ Myrna: Glad you liked. Thanks a lot. :)

@ Susan: You will find that for sure! :)

@: Gillena: Thanks for this nice comment. Linked my poem there. :)

Gillena Cox said...

Thank you Tarang for linking your charming haiku to Monday WRites #86

much love...

Kishan said...

Inspiring ! addiction to readers!

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