Wednesday, May 29, 2013

let’s say Good bye , for a change





Heated arguments
Blaming each other, let’s say
Good bye, for a change


Fresh air of freedom
Following your own dreams and
Desires, for a change



      Poetry Jam
      Poets United
            Theme Thursday
             Haiku My Heart

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49 Comments:

Sherry Blue Sky said...

Ha! This gets right to the heart of the matter. Well said!

Me said...

I love the way you put across things so beautifully Tarang in simple yet elegant words!

Robyn Greenhouse said...

I like the repetition you used. Sometimes good byes can bring a good change!

Susan said...

Change is that good!

Mary said...

GOODBYES can bring a kind of FREEDOM, can't they? Always good to see you in Poetry Jam!

Lisa A. Williams said...

A welcome change in such a situation, lovely write.

Rosemary Nissen-Wade said...

Sounds like a good change! Neatly done.

Helen said...

Yes!!! Love where you went with the prompt.

Akila G said...

Freedom is the spirit to move on! well said...

Neelam Dadhwal said...

Sometimes we really want space and change. well said.

Laurie Kolp said...

Yes, change can be good!

Tarang Sinha said...

Thank you!:)

Tarang Sinha said...

Thank you so much Me for such lovely words for me!!:)

Tarang Sinha said...

Thank you Robyn! Glad you liked it:)

Tarang Sinha said...

Sometimes it's good, Susan!:)

Tarang Sinha said...

Sometimes, they can. Thank you so much!:)

Tarang Sinha said...

Thank you Lisa!:)

Tarang Sinha said...

Thanks so much!:)

Tarang Sinha said...

I'm glad you liked this. Thank you very much Helen!:)

Tarang Sinha said...

You're right. Thanks Akila!:)

Tarang Sinha said...

Yes, you're right. Thank you!:)

Tarang Sinha said...

Yes, they can be...:)

Charleen said...

This is awesome.

alan1704 said...

Sometimes good-bye is the only word

Tarang Sinha said...

Thank you Charleen!:)

Tarang Sinha said...

:)

Reshma said...

Sometimes its better to bid goodbye amicably before things turn ugly and greater hurt follows...Following your dreams is the best way to regain your love of life.

alicekeysmd said...

Painfully beautiful "Let's say goodby for a change". I like this line very much.

mindlovemisery said...

Beautiful and powerful haiku!

Susan Lindquist said...

Succinct and to the point ... yes, for a change just get the parting over ... well done!

Tarang Sinha said...

Very well said Reshma!:)

Tarang Sinha said...

Thank you very much!:)

Tarang Sinha said...

Thank you so much!:)

Tarang Sinha said...

Thank you!:)

Magical Mystical Teacher said...

Sometimes a change is exactly what is needed!

Old Cat

peggy gatto said...

Good advice.....sometimes!

rebecca said...

change can take true courage. so glad to have you and your haiku back at haiku my heart!

Karen said...

Saying goodbye is often the first step to self discovery.

Tarang Sinha said...

Yes, sometimes it's badly needed:)

Tarang Sinha said...

Yes, sometimes...:)

Tarang Sinha said...

Thank you Rebecca!:)

Tarang Sinha said...

Well said Karen! Thanks:)

Suzy said...

Brilliant. Goodbye's are often the beginnings of hellos.
Dropping by from Verse First - Freedom prompt.

Tarang Sinha said...

Thank you so much Suzy!:)

Mrsupole said...

Sometimes you need to make that Good bye permanent because the arguments never stop. They might have different causes or lessen for a while but real change to end the arguments rarely happens. I guess the real change happens when both people move on to find someone who they rarely argues with them. But once in a while saying good bye makes each other realize what is important.

Thanks for sharing such a great Haiku for this weeks Theme Thursday. Hope you have a peaceful week with wonderful dreams.

God bless.

Tarang Sinha said...

Thank you so much Mrsupole!!:)

Rhythm said...

well said! :) sometimes change is necessary :)

Tarang Sinha said...

Yes. Sometimes we all need that...

Gayu said...

Goodbye for Good:) Lovely !

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