Sunday, June 5, 2011

Golden morning

© Written by Tarang Sinha




                                              Image @ Poets United



My heart blossoms like
Roses in a porcelain vase
To see you smiling.

Your innocent smile
Do wonders like warm sunshine
In misty morning.

Your affection is like
Sprinkle of rain on parched earth
Evoking aroma of soil

Twinkle in eyes is
Like glow in a dark night
Spreading light all over

Tender touch gives hope
Of new, fresh golden morning
With vibrant rainbow




Submitted to: Haiku Heights
                            Poets United








21 comments:

  1. I like the like 'tender touch gives hope'
    Everyone needs a tender touch sometimes, and everyone needs a little hope. :o)

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  2. Heart lifting delight ... thank you for sharing!

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  3. I love these lines, "Your affection is like Sprinkle of rain on parched earth Evoking aroma of soil" so refreshing and full of hope~

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  4. your Haiku sets are amazing,
    well done.

    let hope linger,
    bless you.

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  5. I love the smell of soil. I miss that when I travel south. Excellent haiku(s). I may have to try that once. :)

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  6. Beautiful, such heartfelt a haiku =)

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  7. Thanks to all for such heartfelt comments. I'm truly glad you all liked it :)

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  8. Every line is touchable, beauty abound.

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  9. Thank you so much Old Raven & Christine for your appreciation:)

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  10. Thank you so much Short poems.

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  11. The poem is full of love *smiles* :).Keep going!!

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  12. Thank you so much Uma & Harshad Mehta! I'm glad you liked it.

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  13. Very lovely and quite cool if I say so myself. Here's mine http://thelunaticsdiary.blogspot.com

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