Thursday, July 21, 2011

Eyes are that mirror...



Eyes are that mirror
Which reflects the emotions
Can’t be mistaken.

Your enchanting eyes
Have painted the whispers of
True Love On my soul

I heard the music
Which you intended to hide
Your telltale eyes played it.



Submitted to: The Purple Treehouse
                           Haiku My Heart

23 comments:

  1. eyes are that mirror indeed, well done Haikus,
    Thanks for sharing.

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  2. eyes are that mirror indeed, well done Haikus,
    Thanks for sharing.

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  3. the eyes will do that. nice

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  4. Thanks a lot Jingle, Jack & Blackswan. Glad you liked it!

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  5. I love all three of these haiku. What fabulous images I "see" with your words. I don't need a mirror. Great stuff!

    Peace

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  6. Eyes are a mirror. They tell us so much ...

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  7. The eyes mirror the soul... and you captured that perfectly here. =)

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  8. All quite beautiful.. My favorite was the first one!

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  9. welcome tarang,
    and thank you for this climate of love. the idea of eyes so full of love they play music upon another's soul...is stunning.
    so glad you are here.

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  10. Ah, to be able to here the music of the eyes..with eyes.. well done!!! Have a look at my entry on HMH.. for happiness..

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  11. Lovely stuff Tarang - lovely.

    Anna :o]

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  12. Nice form... I haven't done the haiku yet ~

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  13. That is lovely, Tarang! The last line, in particular, is beautifully resonant.

    I know about those musical eyes!

    My haiku is here: www.shawnbird.com/summer-rain

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  14. That is lovely, Tarang! The last line, in particular, is beautifully resonant.

    I know about those musical eyes!

    My haiku is here: www.shawnbird.com/summer-rain

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  15. Very lovely words. Thanks for giving us insight into yourself.

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  16. I truly thank you 'all' for your such nice heartwarming comments. I'm glad you all liked it, It's really encouraging:)

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  17. i especially like your first haiku... and i believe that eyes are, indeed, the mirror of the soul...

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  18. i love that eyes are the windows to our souls.... beautiful revelation of words we can all subscribe to...

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  19. amazing.


    How are you?

    Welcome join us for week 6 short story slam fun,

    Bless you..

    Keep it up!

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  20. i hear your music! lovely, lovely.

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  21. This is really gorgeous!

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  22. apt Haikus.
    well done.


    Greetings:

    Welcome sharing your poetry with us today.

    Poems that are old but need more attention, poems related to nature and life are welcome.

    Keep up the excellence.
    Hope to see you linked in and share.

    BEST!
    xoxox

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