Thursday, September 29, 2011

Rhythm







Moon, floating in rhythm
Slipped out of the veil of clouds
Moonlight bliss sprinkled

Rhythm of melody
Ushers the angst out of mind
Enlivens the soul




9 comments:

  1. Anything Moony fascinates me.. I am happy to be here Tarang.. Thanks.. Well done again..

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  2. I do like that line - enlivens the soul!

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  3. I so love the moon...I like the visual of your haiku...it reminds me of the times the moon slipped through the clouds....music is my salvation at times...I love both of your haikus!

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  4. I like the rhythmic unfolding of beauty in the Haikus.

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  5. Ushering out angst sounds good to me!



    Rhythms here and here

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  6. I love this haiku! So visually stunning~ The last line captures the essence! Well Done

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  7. I truly thank you all for your nice comments!:)

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