Saturday, December 3, 2011

Life needs space to breathe

© Written by Tarang Sinha






                        Image @ It's Thursday


Oppressive worries
Cause stress and tension in life
Life needs space to breathe



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19 comments:

  1. I like your senryu. It says what we all feel...

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  2. ur right, life needs space to breath

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  3. When allowed to flow.. it finds all the space it wants... but will mind ever permit.. that's the gamut.. nicely put Tarang, you made me think with this..

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  4. yes, routine worries n tensions make one feel all choked up n suffocated, We really have to take some time off to breathe!! Like the meaning that "space" holds here.

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  5. @ Gerry: Thanks:)

    @ Zongrik: Yes. Thanks:)

    @ RS: Thank you:)

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  6. Hello.
    I like that..."life needs space to breathe". Isn't that the truth!
    Thanks for sharing.

    Mine:
    Our Candlelight Of Love

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  7. Lovely, and the conciseness of this poem gives the reader space to breathe as well - wonderful!

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  8. Amen! So true. Life does require space to breathe. Beautifully written.

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  9. Indeed, we all need space now and then

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  10. yaa ,,space to breathe. last line is best.

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  11. @ Morning: Thank you so much!:)

    @ Andy: Ya, it's true. Thanks:)

    @ Sherry: Thank you! Glad you liked it:)

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  12. @ Write girl: Thank you so much!:)

    @ Meethimirchi: Yes, you're right. Thanks:)

    @ Neinei: Thank you:)

    @ Ruchi: Thanks!:)

    @ Melanie: Thanks a lot:)

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  13. Greetings:

    how are you today?

    great big thanks for your support and attention to poets rally,
    hope to see you share any time around the year…

    stay blessed, your talent rocks.
    Merry Christmas and Happy New Year.

    xoxox

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