Friday, February 24, 2012

Dream walks

© Written by Tarang Sinha







                As Slumber kisses
    The goodnight, dream walks on the
               Path of subconscious




Dreams walk on the path
               Of wishes and desires
                   Destination calls





                 

 Haiku My Heart
Written for: The Haiku Challenge
Shared @ Poets United





29 comments:

  1. I love both of these...the second is my favorite...

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  2. True...that dreams walk on the path of wishes.Nice.

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  3. @ Susie: Thanks a lot! I'm glad you like it:)

    @ Janaki: Thanks!:)

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  4. Wonderful haiku ~ very ethereal ~ namaste, carol (A Creative Harbor) ^_^

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  5. both are wonderful...the dusk and the dawn versions♥

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  6. Hmmm, made me picture what "Dream" looks like as she walks...
    Love that !
    Happy Friday !

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  7. Sometimes, few words can say a lot :)

    Nice!


    GBU
    Arti

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  8. Just love this pair of haiku... dreams walking on the path of subconscious... wow! Thank you Tarang!

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  9. Nicely done ~~ thank you for sharing your perspective! I'm later than usual, however ... Here is my Day 24.

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  10. Nicely penned --
    I'm later than usual, however ... Here is my Day 24.

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  11. Ah dreams. Can you imagine a life without them?

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  12. I wish the destination of my dreams is soon revealed :)

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  13. as slumber kisses..the good night.. a wonderful soft movement..

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  14. I love the 2 haiku's written by you :) :) The 2nd one is the best ;) Lovely.TC

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  15. love the first haiku! wonderful imagery!

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  16. Oh dear!..Awesome lines...Dreams walk on the path of wishes and desires...Lovely line!

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  17. @ Chèvrefeuille: Thank you:)
    @ Grace: Thanks!:)
    @ Carol: Thanks a lot! Namaste:)
    @ Priti: Thanks!:)

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  18. @ Kim: Thanks! Have a nice day:)

    @ Arti: Thanks! GBU:)

    @ Lea: Thank you so much! Glad you liked it:)

    @ Becca: Thank you so much!:)

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  19. @ Fran: No! I can't:) Thanks!

    @ Live2cherish: May your dreams reach a fruitful & blissful destination. Best wishes:)

    @ Lenora: Thank you!:)

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  20. @ The solitary writer: Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it:)

    @ Tami: Thank you!:)

    @ Valli: Thank you so much!:)

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  21. @ Someone is special: Thank you! Glad you liked it:)

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  22. short lines but made great sense a lot! superb...

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  23. "Dreams walk on the path
    Of wishes and desires"

    and every now and then they go in a different direction

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  24. Sometimes, not always:)
    Thanks for your comment!

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  25. These are both so wonderful!
    I love the second one best~
    I love the idea of walking on this path :D

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