Tuesday, January 25, 2011

Betrayal.






Life seemed marooned
No love and care for her.
Loneliness crept in her life,
And lost its color.

Breaking the rules of the wedlock,
She dared to walk on the path of betrayal.
Her heart drawn inexplicably…
…towards a stranger,
This novel feeling was giving her jitters.

Unlike her hubby,
He showed a great affection and heed.
A friend, and companion,
She positively need.

He entered in her life,
Like a dream.
Scourge of solitude…
Transformed into gleam.

 Laughter echoed,
And bliss shrouded like golden rays.
Night became dreamy and…
…charming are the days.

But…
… she wondered,
What will she get from this emotion?
Perhaps,
She was walking on an endless path,
Which might’ve no destination.




Prompt@: Magpie Tales
                    Jingle poetry
                   One Single Impression




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22 Comments:

uma.a said...

Interesting!Wonderful take on the prompt.

Jingle said...

no destination?

maybe.
dynamic and fine write.
Thanks for sharing..

A++

Tarang said...

Thank you so much uma.a & Jingle :)

Shadow said...

an exciting path it may be, but where does it lead, indeed...

Reflections said...

Interesting take... bewildered by the lack of a destination, but yet I see destinations even in the small momentary pauses on the paths of life.

Tumblewords: said...

Interesting, to be sure!

moonlitpoetic said...

A poignant story, well written and touching.

120 Socks said...

Good take on the prompt, I want to know what happens next!

Sioux Roslawski said...

A path with no destination? Imagine that...

gautami tripathy said...

Good one...

zeroing into the arrow

Kavita said...

This was just fantastic, Tarang!! We humans have a habit of analyzing situations a tad too much...don't we?! :)
I only hope she goes with the moment, and lives her life the way she WANTS to!
I really liked your take on the prompt, my friend.. very very interesting and great food for thought!

Tarang said...

@ Shadow, Reflections, Tumblewords & Moonlitpoetic : Thank you so much :)

Tarang said...

@ 120Socks : Hmmm I'll have to think. Thanks. :)

Tarang said...

@ Sioux Roslawski & Gautami: Thanks.

Tarang said...

Thank you so much Kavita! I'm glad you liked it. Your comment is very encouraging.

sandra said...

interesting thoughts.!

Shauna said...

awesome journey. your poem seduces
the readers thoughts - to what if,
well-done.

Gyanban said...

Very thoughtfully crafted. Liked it.

The Cello Strings said...

great take on the prompt.
:)

Maggie said...

It can scare a person to walk toward the unknown all alone

VaNdAnA ShArMa said...

Beautiful poem, but she might find her destination.

Tarang Sinha said...

Maybe. I'm glad you liked this poem Vandana. Thank you!:)

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