My Translation

Tuesday, January 25, 2011

Betrayal.






Life seemed marooned
No love and care for her.
Loneliness crept in her life,
And lost its color.

Breaking the rules of the wedlock,
She dared to walk on the path of betrayal.
Her heart drawn inexplicably…
…towards a stranger,
This novel feeling was giving her jitters.

Unlike her hubby,
He showed a great affection and heed.
A friend, and companion,
She positively need.

He entered in her life,
Like a dream.
Scourge of solitude…
Transformed into gleam.

 Laughter echoed,
And bliss shrouded like golden rays.
Night became dreamy and…
…charming are the days.

But…
… she wondered,
What will she get from this emotion?
Perhaps,
She was walking on an endless path,
Which might’ve no destination.




Prompt@: Magpie Tales
                    Jingle poetry
                   One Single Impression



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22 comments:

  1. Uma AnandaneJanuary 26, 2011 at 4:01 AM

    Interesting!Wonderful take on the prompt.

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  2. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis HallJanuary 26, 2011 at 8:13 AM

    no destination?

    maybe.
    dynamic and fine write.
    Thanks for sharing..

    A++

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  3. Tarang SinhaJanuary 26, 2011 at 10:43 AM

    Thank you so much uma.a & Jingle :)

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  4. ShadowJanuary 26, 2011 at 12:26 PM

    an exciting path it may be, but where does it lead, indeed...

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  5. ReflectionsJanuary 26, 2011 at 11:35 PM

    Interesting take... bewildered by the lack of a destination, but yet I see destinations even in the small momentary pauses on the paths of life.

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  6. Tumblewords:January 27, 2011 at 4:47 AM

    Interesting, to be sure!

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  7. AnonymousJanuary 27, 2011 at 5:12 AM

    A poignant story, well written and touching.

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  8. LouiseJanuary 28, 2011 at 2:19 AM

    Good take on the prompt, I want to know what happens next!

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  9. Sioux RoslawskiJanuary 28, 2011 at 5:46 PM

    A path with no destination? Imagine that...

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  10. gautami tripathyJanuary 29, 2011 at 6:28 PM

    Good one...

    zeroing into the arrow

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  11. KavitaFebruary 1, 2011 at 5:07 AM

    This was just fantastic, Tarang!! We humans have a habit of analyzing situations a tad too much...don't we?! :)
    I only hope she goes with the moment, and lives her life the way she WANTS to!
    I really liked your take on the prompt, my friend.. very very interesting and great food for thought!

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  12. Tarang SinhaFebruary 4, 2011 at 12:51 PM

    @ Shadow, Reflections, Tumblewords & Moonlitpoetic : Thank you so much :)

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  13. Tarang SinhaFebruary 4, 2011 at 12:53 PM

    @ 120Socks : Hmmm I'll have to think. Thanks. :)

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  14. Tarang SinhaFebruary 4, 2011 at 12:54 PM

    @ Sioux Roslawski & Gautami: Thanks.

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  15. Tarang SinhaFebruary 4, 2011 at 12:56 PM

    Thank you so much Kavita! I'm glad you liked it. Your comment is very encouraging.

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  16. AnonymousSeptember 18, 2011 at 7:26 PM

    interesting thoughts.!

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  17. ShaunaSeptember 18, 2011 at 9:23 PM

    awesome journey. your poem seduces
    the readers thoughts - to what if,
    well-done.

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  18. aayanmanSeptember 19, 2011 at 8:42 PM

    Very thoughtfully crafted. Liked it.

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  19. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis HallSeptember 20, 2011 at 12:38 AM

    great take on the prompt.
    :)

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  20. MaggieSeptember 21, 2011 at 12:49 AM

    It can scare a person to walk toward the unknown all alone

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  21. Vandana SharmaApril 22, 2013 at 8:27 PM

    Beautiful poem, but she might find her destination.

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    1. Tarang SinhaApril 22, 2013 at 10:59 PM

      Maybe. I'm glad you liked this poem Vandana. Thank you!:)

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