A Home is a paradise,
Walls paved with…
…concrete love.
Roof of ultimate concern.
Doors of happiness.
Windows letting in the air …
…of contentment.
A haven where one gets
Peace,
Privacy,
Closeness,
Harmony
And security.
A place permeated with…
…aroma of good food.
Sharing juicy ramblings…
…over the tea table,
Adding...
... spurts of amusement.
Echoing chuckles of…
…children,
Resonating mirth and…
…melody.
Creating an aura…
… so peaceful.
A place, where…
…bond of love develops…
…and strengthens.
Caring and sharing…
…burgeons,
Ebbing away the sorrows.
A place like temple
Where heart fills with…
…serenity.
Where all the stress…
…of outer world,
Diminishes.
A beautiful world…
… within the world.
A home,
The most sacred place,
Humming the…
…melody of elation.
Written for: Jingle Poetry (Home, Temple And sanctum)
Sunday Scribblings (Food)
Monday's Child
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A home can be some many things ...we just have to choose....calm amongst chaos...bonds among strife....liked this.
ReplyDeletedreamy home to be.
ReplyDeletelove your take.
have fun!
A++
Perfect home cemented with all good things!
ReplyDeleteHappy heart :)
A beautiful tribute to Home and family....truly enjoyed this wonderful visit into your heart and home...bkm
ReplyDeleteit all happens at home.. lovely thought! my potluck's here: http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/06/04/metamorphosis/
ReplyDelete@Rekha: Yes, one can feel in various ways. It's about searching and choosing words. Liked your choice of words. Thanks.
ReplyDelete@ Jingle, Bendedspoon,Bkm and Fiveloaf: Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it :)
ReplyDeleteHi Tarang,
ReplyDeleteNot in haiku form, but lovely still :)
Hope to see you again with some haiku for us!
There is nothing like the feeling of coming back home safe. You captured all those feelings so well.
ReplyDeleteSheilagh Lee said: I love your peom about home!
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Oldegg & Lee!:)
ReplyDeleteWonderful poetry, deep thoughts, tender.
ReplyDeleteNice take for so many prompts.
Thanks Jenn. Actually I'm a bit novice for Haiku.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Reflections!
ReplyDeletejust gorgeous tarang. wonderful sentiments and beautiful poem.
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Thank you so much Trisha!
ReplyDeleteabslolutely delightful poem this..home, ah, home..
ReplyDeleteYou've truly captured the warmth and security of home. Nicely done.
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@ Ramesh Sood: Ah! Home! Really. Thanks!
ReplyDeleteThanks Grandma's :)
ReplyDeletehome is where the heart is.
ReplyDeleteThat is a beautiful picture you have painted
ReplyDeleteThank you so much ThomG & Shail!:)
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Thanks for the support, You Rock!
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Thank you so much Jingle! :) Best wishes.
ReplyDelete'Home' can mean so many things. Like your 'home'.
ReplyDeleteBest wishes,
Anna
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I really enjoyed this poem about home. Cheers, Wendy
ReplyDeleteYou touched upon all the home bases in a delicate poem of great depth. Well done.
ReplyDeleteWhat a beutiful, loving reflection of home. This is the home everyone deserves and we all try to build for our families.
ReplyDeleteI think we truly appreciate the sanctity of our homes when we leave them. There really is no place like home.
ReplyDeleteYour home is a wonderful temple. I came to visit via Poetry Jam.
ReplyDelete"A beautiful world within a world".....beautiful!
ReplyDeleteEverything a home should be!
ReplyDeleteThanks for linking to Poetry Jam!
ReplyDelete@ Judy: Thank you so much!:)
ReplyDelete@ Helen: Yes, there's no place like home:) Thanks for your comment.
@ Enchanted Oak: Thank you!:)
@ Carrie: Thanks a lot! Glad you liked it:)
ReplyDelete@ Margaret: Thanks!:)
@ Mary: Thanks!
Elation indeed- and wonderful memories. This is delightful!
ReplyDeletelovely home imagery.
ReplyDeletemake a contribution to us if you could, bless you.
Yes, yes, yes! Beautiful~ and my heart aches for those who long for it.
ReplyDeleteOh but to have just a few stanzas in the hustle and bustle of the "new home".
ReplyDeleteYes indeed, the perfect home. Thanks for the read
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed your poem, I like the way you set it up. You could almost hear it floating out the window as you passed by.
ReplyDeleteJust wonderful, I so love your take on HOME! Fun to read,so sentimental and filled with love!
ReplyDeleteLove all the things that are home to you...it is the life lived and not the place it is lived in
ReplyDelete@ Laurie: Thank you!:)
ReplyDelete@ Promising Poets...: Thanks!:)
@ Janet: Thank you so much for liking this:)
@ Booguloo: :)
@ WinterWrites: Thank you!:)
ReplyDelete@ Raining Iguanas: Thank you so much! Glad you liked it:)
@ Ella: Thank you so much for liking this!:)
@ Susie: Thanks!:)
@ WinterWrites: Thank you!:)
ReplyDelete@ Raining Iguanas: Thank you so much! Glad you liked it:)
@ Ella: Thank you so much for liking this!:)
@ Susie: Thanks!:)
Wherever you may go..,if you have a place to come back , then it is your "Home" ..people, who have this final shelter are the luckiest one's...
ReplyDeleteHome sweet home, I love the description and the attributes you give to home, and each one I agree with.
ReplyDeleteThank you very much!:)
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