Thursday, June 27, 2013

A smooth journey





Emotions melted
They break the periphery

For a smooth journey







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45 Comments:

Kalpana Solsi said...

WOW! What a lovely Haiku. The B/W pic is apt.

Saru Singhal said...

Emotions melting and relating it to tears is such a beautiful expression. Lovely!

Tarang Sinha said...

Thank you so much Kalpana!!:)

Tarang Sinha said...

Glad you liked it. Thank you Saru!:)

VaNdAnA ShArMa said...

When emotions are hit hard, they indeed strew the path .

ssmatthews451 said...

nice

Magical Mystical Teacher said...

Oh, if every journey could be smooth!

Sipping Stars

readinpleasure said...

Great metaphor.

acreativeharbor.com said...

How true ~ lovely haiku ~

acreativeharbor.com said...

So true ~ lovely haiku ~ (this may be a duplicate post)

wabisabipoet said...

Ah your words are a smooth journey indeed!Haiku My Heart with Golden Stars and Sunflowers

Tarang Sinha said...

True!

Tarang Sinha said...

Thanks!:)

Tarang Sinha said...

I wish...:)

Tarang Sinha said...

Thank you!:)

Tarang Sinha said...

Thanks a lot!:)

Tarang Sinha said...

Thank you very much!:)

rebecca said...

such a perfect haiku
expressing a profound inner journey.
why do we resist the healing that comes from honest expression?

Tarang Sinha said...

Thank you Rebecca!:)

Kalpana Solsi said...

Re-read your Haiku. The sketch of the eye and tear look real.

Marit said...

Strong words and strong emotion - wonderful haiku!

Anand S Unni said...

Good haiku. Loved the image, it was glorified by your apt words. :)

Sri Valli said...

Lovely expression on tears! Beautiful haiku Tarang! :)

JaLpArI - tHe MeRmAiD said...

That is what a haiku is about.. to be short yet powerful! Your's was perfect :)

Nataša Dolenc said...

I love the beginning image.. the fact that emotion can melt.. beautiful.

TALON said...

The times of pain...hard, but I think our tears smooth the rough patches. This was lovely!

Laura said...

so beautiful... sometimes it does indeed take the release of tears to break the surface tension and heal the depths of our hearts.

Sherry Blue Sky said...

"for a smooth journey"......I enjoyed your haiku so much.

Tarang Sinha said...

Thanks for re-reading it!!
Yes, it's really nice sketch!! :)

Tarang Sinha said...

Thank you so much Marit!:)

Tarang Sinha said...

Thank you!:)

Tarang Sinha said...

Thanks a lot Valli!:)

Tarang Sinha said...

Thank you so much!! Glad you liked it:)

Tarang Sinha said...

Thanks Natasa!:)

Tarang Sinha said...

Well said Talon. Thank you!:)

Tarang Sinha said...

True! Thank you:)

Tarang Sinha said...

Thank you very much!:)

hyperCRYPTICal said...

Lovely, lovely, lovely!

Anna :o]

Tarang Sinha said...

Thank you, Thank you, Thank you for such a lovely comment!:)

Mrsupole said...

I guess it could be a strange thing that I chose this following Thursday's new theme as "journey" and not as of yet read your Haiku, I guess you could say it was a good choice to match them up.

My headache is feeling a little better right now and so am being able to read through the postings. So am glad to see someone thinking along the same lines.

I love the picture and am so jealous of those eyebrows, they do look real. Loved how the Haiku put feelings into the picture and then when you looked at it again you could feel the sadness in your heart.

Thanks for sharing such a wonderful Haiku with us for this weeks Theme Thursday. Have a happy week.

God bless.

Tarang Sinha said...

Glad you liked it. Thank you for such a nice comment!:)

Nanka said...

The overflow of emotions when heartfelt!! Well expressed!!
Coming from Haiku My Heart~Firefly

Tarang Sinha said...

Thanks for visiting & liking my work!:)

R.K. Garon said...

:-)

Tarang Sinha said...

:)

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