My Translation

Wednesday, January 26, 2011

Conscience



Tranquility scooches and, conniption…
…finds a way in the mind.
Distinction between right and wrong…
…Becomes intricate to find.
 The conscience turns janky
And it may obliterate…
…the Amity, Ability and opportunity.

Try controlling your anger.
Kill the hatred...
... and develop harmony.
Spread peace and love everywhere,
The whole world will be…
…basking in the glory.


Prompt @: 3WW

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16 comments:

  1. Jae RoseJanuary 26, 2011 at 8:38 PM

    What an agile piece - you really used your words carefully and beautifully - 'amity, ability and opportunity'..was my favourite line..Jae

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  2. Tarang SinhaJanuary 26, 2011 at 9:43 PM

    Thanks Jae. :)

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  3. Sheilagh LeeJanuary 26, 2011 at 10:45 PM

    Wow you said so much with so little and using the prompts incredible.Truly lovely.

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  4. Sheilagh LeeJanuary 26, 2011 at 10:45 PM

    Sheilagh Lee said:Beautiful

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  5. Ramesh SoodJanuary 26, 2011 at 11:14 PM

    Indeed.. we must all live like that.. loved it..

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  6. VL SheridanJanuary 26, 2011 at 11:30 PM

    Great use of the words and I love the message. Well done.

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  7. rmpWritingsJanuary 27, 2011 at 2:07 AM

    i enjoyed the way you used the words with intangible objects. the poem has a very nice feel to it. Lovely!

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  8. Cell at SeaJanuary 27, 2011 at 4:10 AM

    I especially loved the ellipses trailing off and on in some of the lines. An interesting stylistic choice that really makes this poem slip past smoothly.

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  9. shailJanuary 27, 2011 at 10:51 AM

    Good use of prompt words

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  10. Grandma's GoulashJanuary 27, 2011 at 1:36 PM

    You met the challenge and surpassed it. Nicely done.

    My 3WW: The Victual Voyager

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  11. Tarang SinhaJanuary 27, 2011 at 1:49 PM

    Thanks. I'm glad you all liked it:)

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  12. UnknownJanuary 28, 2011 at 4:22 AM

    Oh boy, do I hate it when my conscience turns janky! Great use of the prompts.

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  13. Thom GabrukiewiczFebruary 1, 2011 at 10:44 PM

    great job with a tough challenge.

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  14. Tarang SinhaFebruary 4, 2011 at 12:41 PM

    Thanks Kim :)

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  15. Tarang SinhaFebruary 4, 2011 at 12:46 PM

    Thanks ThomG. Yeah, it was a bit tough indeed.

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  16. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis HallJune 24, 2011 at 1:59 PM

    this is brilliant.
    smiles.

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