Friday, February 4, 2011

Freedom

         

  Between the dark and the daylight
           When the night is beginning to lower
           Comes a pause in the day’s occupation
           That is known as the children’s hour.


           She adhered at the balcony and…
           …took a glimpse of the beautiful park.
           Giggles of chuckling girls…
           …resonated the aura like a lark.


           Swinging & singing together
           Their face gleamed with delight.
           Gesture reflecting the gist of liberty.
           As the swing took the flight.


            Attributes of childhood are…
            …No worries and no mess,
            No superiority complex and jealousy
            Only virtue and heartfelt happiness


           Yes, this is the freedom indeed
           She realized.
           She traveled in the reminiscences
           …and became nostalgic.


           Life, now seemed tedious
           Permeated with jumble and boredom.
           She too wanted to burst into guffaws
           And absorb the essence of freedom.




Prompt @: Carry on tuesday 
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16 Comments:

Gloria said...

This works well for the prompt, and I enjoyed the view from the balcony. It was delightful!
Gloria

Tarang said...

Thanks Gloria :)

Jingle said...

keep swinging,
thanks for sharing.
:)

Tarang said...

Thanks Jingle!:)

Tess Kincaid said...

I find myself swinging far too little these days.

Promising Poets Parking Lot said...

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Tarang said...

Keep swinging Tess. Thanks :)

Tarang said...

Thanks PPPL! I'm glad you liked my poems.

jaerose said...

'jumble and boredom'..what a wonderful description..the swings are always in the park thoug..no matter how old you are..Jae

Tarang said...

Thanks Jae:)

Cynthia M said...

I loved this...I was on those swings too, great imagery:)

WarmSunshine said...

Freedom is definitely that! I loved this poem Tarang :) And the image fits so well. Dropping by from SS :)

Happy Monday!

Tarang said...

Thanks Cynthia & WarmSunshine. I'm glad you liked it.:)

Meryl said...

I loved the interplay between powerful image and vivid words!

Andy said...

I remember when...
As adults, we don't have the same kind of freedom like we did when we were kids (job, mortgage, bills, life, etc.)
Lovely imagery.

Tarang said...

Thank you so much Meryl & Andy.

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