My Translation

Sunday, June 5, 2011

Golden morning




                                              Image @ Poets United



My heart blossoms like
Roses in a porcelain vase
To see you smiling.

Your innocent smile
Do wonders like warm sunshine
In misty morning.

Your affection is like
Sprinkle of rain on parched earth
Evoking aroma of soil

Twinkle in eyes is
Like glow in a dark night
Spreading light all over

Tender touch gives hope
Of new, fresh golden morning
With vibrant rainbow




Submitted to: Haiku Heights
                            Poets United








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21 comments:

  1. Other MaryJune 5, 2011 at 3:09 AM

    I like the like 'tender touch gives hope'
    Everyone needs a tender touch sometimes, and everyone needs a little hope. :o)

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  2. AnonymousJune 5, 2011 at 4:03 AM

    Heart lifting delight ... thank you for sharing!

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  3. EllaJune 5, 2011 at 4:33 AM

    I love these lines, "Your affection is like Sprinkle of rain on parched earth Evoking aroma of soil" so refreshing and full of hope~

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  4. JingleJune 5, 2011 at 5:18 AM

    your Haiku sets are amazing,
    well done.

    let hope linger,
    bless you.

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  5. Gemma WisemanJune 5, 2011 at 6:54 AM

    A hypnotic reflection on feelings!

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  6. Henry ClemmonsJune 5, 2011 at 10:16 AM

    I love the smell of soil. I miss that when I travel south. Excellent haiku(s). I may have to try that once. :)

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  7. AnonymousJune 5, 2011 at 12:23 PM

    Beautiful, such heartfelt a haiku =)

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  8. Tarang SinhaJune 5, 2011 at 8:14 PM

    Thanks to all for such heartfelt comments. I'm truly glad you all liked it :)

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  9. Liz Rice-SosneJune 5, 2011 at 8:45 PM

    These are lovely!

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  10. ChristineJune 6, 2011 at 2:09 AM

    Every line is touchable, beauty abound.

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  11. Tarang SinhaJune 6, 2011 at 4:56 PM

    Thank you so much Old Raven & Christine for your appreciation:)

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  12. Short PoemsJune 6, 2011 at 11:57 PM

    Lovely write so nicely done!
    Palindrome poems

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  13. Short PoemsJune 6, 2011 at 11:57 PM

    Lovely write so nicely done!
    Palindrome poems

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  14. Tarang SinhaJune 7, 2011 at 7:55 AM

    Thank you so much Short poems.

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  15. Uma AnandaneJune 8, 2011 at 4:26 PM

    The poem is full of love *smiles* :).Keep going!!

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  16. Harshad MehtaJune 9, 2011 at 11:03 PM

    lines touching heart. Lovely.

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  17. Tarang SinhaJune 10, 2011 at 12:11 PM

    Thank you so much Uma & Harshad Mehta! I'm glad you liked it.

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  18. batsickJune 11, 2011 at 12:27 AM

    Very lovely and quite cool if I say so myself. Here's mine http://thelunaticsdiary.blogspot.com

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  19. Tarang SinhaJune 11, 2011 at 8:14 AM

    Thanks a lot Shigune!

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  20. Steve IsaakJune 15, 2011 at 3:40 AM

    Sweet write.

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  21. Tarang SinhaJune 15, 2011 at 11:32 AM

    Thanks Steve.

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