Sunday, June 5, 2011

Golden morning




                                              Image @ Poets United



My heart blossoms like
Roses in a porcelain vase
To see you smiling.

Your innocent smile
Do wonders like warm sunshine
In misty morning.

Your affection is like
Sprinkle of rain on parched earth
Evoking aroma of soil

Twinkle in eyes is
Like glow in a dark night
Spreading light all over

Tender touch gives hope
Of new, fresh golden morning
With vibrant rainbow




Submitted to: Haiku Heights
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21 Comments:

Mary said...

I like the like 'tender touch gives hope'
Everyone needs a tender touch sometimes, and everyone needs a little hope. :o)

beccagivens said...

Heart lifting delight ... thank you for sharing!

Ella said...

I love these lines, "Your affection is like Sprinkle of rain on parched earth Evoking aroma of soil" so refreshing and full of hope~

Jingle said...

your Haiku sets are amazing,
well done.

let hope linger,
bless you.

Greyscale Territory said...

A hypnotic reflection on feelings!

Henry Clemmons said...

I love the smell of soil. I miss that when I travel south. Excellent haiku(s). I may have to try that once. :)

mindlovemisery said...

Beautiful, such heartfelt a haiku =)

Tarang said...

Thanks to all for such heartfelt comments. I'm truly glad you all liked it :)

Old Raven said...

These are lovely!

Christine said...

Every line is touchable, beauty abound.

Tarang said...

Thank you so much Old Raven & Christine for your appreciation:)

Short Poems said...

Lovely write so nicely done!
Palindrome poems

Short Poems said...

Lovely write so nicely done!
Palindrome poems

Tarang said...

Thank you so much Short poems.

UmaAnandane said...

The poem is full of love *smiles* :).Keep going!!

Harshad mehta said...

lines touching heart. Lovely.

Tarang said...

Thank you so much Uma & Harshad Mehta! I'm glad you liked it.

Shigune Matsui said...

Very lovely and quite cool if I say so myself. Here's mine http://thelunaticsdiary.blogspot.com

Tarang Sinha said...

Thanks a lot Shigune!

Steve Isaak said...

Sweet write.

Tarang Sinha said...

Thanks Steve.

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