My Translation

Thursday, June 16, 2011

Lost!





“Bricks of a home should be cemented with love, peace and care. Our home is just like that and our baby would fill it with mirth and melody.” Priya’s emotion and excitement laden voice resonated in his ears as he cosseted his new born baby girl. She was the reflection of her mother.

Varun remembered how Priya always planned everything for their baby. Everything was going fine until she suffered from an urgent labor pains. He immediately hurried to his home from his office and then to the hospital.

Her cries were unbearable and heart wrenching for him. Few hours passed like an era. Then his painful heart fluttered to hear the wails of his baby. After that, everything went silent. “I’m sorry; we couldn’t save your wife.” The doctor declared this life shattering news.

He took his pink, soft baby girl in his trembling hands. They both lost their happiness. All the love, peace and care were lost! Lost forever.




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28 comments:

  1. RJune 16, 2011 at 4:06 PM

    oh my! thats a sad story!

    well written and succint !

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  2. RJune 16, 2011 at 4:06 PM

    oh my! thats a sad story!

    well written and succint !

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  3. CreativityJune 16, 2011 at 8:41 PM

    Touching Write Up.

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  4. un-speackable love 2June 16, 2011 at 9:29 PM

    wow really got to me there :( but good work :) hope u like my take on the theme :)

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  5. Steve IsaakJune 17, 2011 at 6:50 AM

    Pleasant write.

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  6. MaggieJune 17, 2011 at 7:58 AM

    Very sad. A well written piece.

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  7. Tarang SinhaJune 17, 2011 at 1:16 PM

    I Thank you all for your nice comments. I'm glad you all liked it.

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  8. AnonymousJune 17, 2011 at 3:19 PM

    Sad, but glad the father and daughter have each other that both mother and child didn't die :O)

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  9. Tarang SinhaJune 17, 2011 at 3:56 PM

    It's good that you have a positive frame of mind:)

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  10. Shail RaghuvanshiJune 17, 2011 at 7:51 PM

    That was very nice Tarang.

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  11. KarenJune 17, 2011 at 8:41 PM

    Such a sad story, but yet, that quote at the beginning is still true. With that beautiful baby, the house will become a home. Wonderful writing!

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  12. the criticsJune 19, 2011 at 3:59 PM

    priya found in another form...as his daughter :( :)

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  13. Tarang SinhaJune 19, 2011 at 10:36 PM

    @ Shail: Thank you so much.

    @ Karen: Of course it will become a home. Thanks.

    @ The critics: Yes you're right. Thanks.

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  14. AnonymousJune 20, 2011 at 4:53 AM

    What sadness -- but well written!

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  15. wenaJune 22, 2011 at 5:24 PM

    Thank you for sharing this wonderful yet sad post!

    beautiful!



    xoxo,
    wenavee

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  16. Teresa MarieOctober 13, 2011 at 12:07 AM

    Really didn't plan on crying today, lol! Great story you gave us but so sad :( Blessings, Terri

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  17. Belva Rae StaplesOctober 13, 2011 at 9:46 PM

    Lovely, but so sad!!

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  18. AnonymousOctober 13, 2011 at 9:59 PM

    poor baby will be so lonely without mama.

    http://zongrik.wordpress.com/2011/10/13/son/

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  19. keiths ramblingsOctober 13, 2011 at 10:00 PM

    So moving. Nothing else I can say.

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  20. KayOctober 16, 2011 at 1:01 PM

    A heart-wrenching story that is very well written. I love the photograph you've used. Thank you!

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  21. AnonymousOctober 16, 2011 at 8:03 PM

    a powerhouse write, fantastic to read

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  22. Tarang SinhaOctober 16, 2011 at 9:48 PM

    @ abthomas: Thank you so much!

    @ Kay: Thanks!:)

    @ Keith: Thanks a lot:)

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  23. Tarang SinhaOctober 16, 2011 at 9:50 PM

    @ Becca: Yeah, it's sad:( Thanks:)

    @ Wena: Thank you. I'm glad you liked it:)

    @ Morning: Thanks:)

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  24. Tarang SinhaOctober 16, 2011 at 9:54 PM

    @ Terri: Thank you so much! It's sad but I'm glad you liked it:)

    @ Belva: Yeah sad:( Thanks:)

    @ Zongrik: Yes, but at least her father is with her.

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  25. Anna :o]October 16, 2011 at 10:38 PM

    A sad story indeed.

    Anna :o]

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  26. Ann LeFloreOctober 19, 2011 at 4:08 AM

    very touching and so sad so well written
    http://gatelesspassage.com/2011/10/17/to-my-son/

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  27. e.a.s. demersOctober 21, 2011 at 6:24 AM

    Wonderfully real and tragic... glad to see I wasn't the only one who veered from the "happy" path with this prompt :-)

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  28. Tarang SinhaOctober 21, 2011 at 12:12 PM

    Thank you so much Ann & Demers:)

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